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Array ( [sid] => 112876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Die. [time] => 2006-01-09 23:12:44 [hometext] => just another one of my poems .. plz feel free to comment!!!This is short.:( [bodytext] => I want to die cant you see there isnt nothing left here for me.

I apply to you that I want you to buy me some time.

I am going to tell everyone bye..

Please do not cry for me when I die.

I have deny myself of all lies.

Please when I die , please go and dry your eyes .

I want to fly like a bird in the sky.

Tell my mom hi for me when I die and tell her please dont cry for me.

When I die I hope you are near but please dont cry for me. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Die.

Contributed by butterflygirl40 on Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 11:12:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I want to die cant you see there isnt nothing left here for me.

I apply to you that I want you to buy me some time.

I am going to tell everyone bye..

Please do not cry for me when I die.

I have deny myself of all lies.

Please when I die , please go and dry your eyes .

I want to fly like a bird in the sky.

Tell my mom hi for me when I die and tell her please dont cry for me.

When I die I hope you are near but please dont cry for me.

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Re: Die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 12:38:52 AM AEST
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Don't die... it's actually pretty good. Strangely playful with it's rhyming. Very touching at the end. Thanks for sharing.

Aq.

Re: Die. (User Rating: 1 )
by cheralex on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 02:48:22 AM AEST
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I hope this isn't a cry for help... when ever i read poetry with this sort of stuff I feel like somewhere someone is suffering and asking for help!

Re: Die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 01:41:57 PM AEST
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your writting is your salvation u will never desert it, your style even more than the content is a dead give away 2 your turmoil
that leads u 2 write these epressions of desperation, none the less they r verry effctive in a carthartic way, as 4 wanting 2 die,
no want's 2 die, as much as they wanna live according 2 there own ideals, great writting.

Ben

Re: Die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th January 2006 @ 04:34:32 AM AEST
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Such a sad write but I think you really know in your heart someone will always be there to love you and will definitely cry if you die.

A very heartfelt write.

Take care,

Tim
:-)

Re: Die. (User Rating: 1 )
by XXpurpleducktapeXX on Saturday, 14th January 2006 @ 03:27:12 AM AEST
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This one makes me sad it makes me thinking about neil

Re: Die. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 11:45:03 PM AEST
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I know,sometime I feel low in spirit, but I also know, I cannot leave to go to heaven until God says so, so, I just keep doing all that I can while I am here, and actually, I love life here... reason why, I make it fun, and loving. Raquel Leah

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