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I really dont know what I was thinking when I wrote this. Its just about life in general I guess, and how I wish some things in it were different. Thanks for reading!

Linny [bodytext] => "A Place Called Heaven"

A Place called heaven I’ve never known,
A single soul,
A tiny cry,
A story yet untold.

Where love is not a burden,
Love is not a crime,
Yet somewhere it’s been taken,
When your life runs out of time.

Every breath of every day,
Counting all the ‘yesterdays’
Of times when nothing seemed worth while,
Nothing ever brought a smile.

Hope is all I think of.
Hope is all I need.
My soul will reach for one more chance,
When time no longer fights to breathe.

So a place called heaven,
I will someday know.
My strength, my will,
My only hope.

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A Palce Called Heaven

Contributed by Linny on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

"A Place Called Heaven"

A Place called heaven I’ve never known,
A single soul,
A tiny cry,
A story yet untold.

Where love is not a burden,
Love is not a crime,
Yet somewhere it’s been taken,
When your life runs out of time.

Every breath of every day,
Counting all the ‘yesterdays’
Of times when nothing seemed worth while,
Nothing ever brought a smile.

Hope is all I think of.
Hope is all I need.
My soul will reach for one more chance,
When time no longer fights to breathe.

So a place called heaven,
I will someday know.
My strength, my will,
My only hope.

Copyright Â© Linny ... [ 2003-01-25 22:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Palce Called Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:26:00 AM AEST
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I liked this. We all hold so much in our heart so dear, that when that time shall come to meet our creator, its a wonderful event, however the human demise, but the heavenly one, will be well worth the wait and having the strength and will, to have in your heart HIS Lord, will be there to greet you. :)
nice write,
AMber Rose :)

Re: A Palce Called Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 05:10:35 PM AEST
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You have certainly got to a fundemental truth. Life without hope is no life at all and the greatest crime is to destroy someones hopes.

But as to heaven, it's everywhere. It's all around us. Please read my poem "Heaven is where you find it" and you'll see what I mean

Nice write

Re: A Palce Called Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 04:34:36 AM AEST
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You write so beautifully! I hope you never lose hold of your hope. It's such a rare thing to find in people these days. Awesome write.

~ Moonlit Angel

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