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waiting for me like I knew you would
I am always with you and you are with me
hiding behind each others eyes
watching to make sure the world wont hurt you
your voice alone makes me cry a thousand tears
your touch makes me shiver with delight
I look into the abyss which is your eyes
and I see the world in pieces
I see myself a small tiny part
but wrapped in your arms safe and warm
who decided you would be perfect
to me are just that
if I could not hear I would love to just look at you
if I could not see I would be happy just to hear you
but my love
if I was to ever lose you, I could never live another day
you saved my soul from hell
you saved my heart from freezing
please don’t ever leave me
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You saved my heart from freezing

Contributed by Lessa on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 07:15:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I fell out of hell and there you stood
waiting for me like I knew you would
I am always with you and you are with me
hiding behind each others eyes
watching to make sure the world wont hurt you
your voice alone makes me cry a thousand tears
your touch makes me shiver with delight
I look into the abyss which is your eyes
and I see the world in pieces
I see myself a small tiny part
but wrapped in your arms safe and warm
who decided you would be perfect
to me are just that
if I could not hear I would love to just look at you
if I could not see I would be happy just to hear you
but my love
if I was to ever lose you, I could never live another day
you saved my soul from hell
you saved my heart from freezing
please don’t ever leave me

Copyright Â© Lessa ... [ 2006-01-02 19:15:48]
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Re: You saved my heart from freezing (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 07:32:52 PM AEST
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Damn! it shouldn't matter how you try to write this poem,it is beautiful. it is hard to write poems about being in love because it feel so good that you can't express it. i have been in some relationships and dumd ones at that and hurtful ones. but now i really am with someone that i truly like, i can't express it enough in my poems. it is not enough words to express it. i like this poem.

Re: You saved my heart from freezing (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 08:22:50 PM AEST
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nice write you did a good job i liked it

Re: You saved my heart from freezing (User Rating: 1 )
by rocken88 on Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 09:58:35 PM AEST
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very very nice write. makes me wish i was in love.

Re: You saved my heart from freezing (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 01:26:56 AM AEST
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brilliant. that's all i have to say.

Re: You saved my heart from freezing (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 11:25:56 PM AEST
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this was spectacluar .. i liked these linbes:

if I could not hear I would love to just look at you
if I could not see I would be happy just to hear you
but my love
if I was to ever lose you, I could never live another day
you saved my soul from hell
you saved my heart from freezing
please don’t ever leave me

cuz its really what i would feel.. i really want to be in love and see him looking in my eyes like i am the only one he wants to be with.. and thats only a part of what love could be! .. but how would i know.. cuz i dont know YET!! i liked it.. you just made life simply stop..in the moment where your heart is.

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