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Array ( [sid] => 11210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Killer in me [time] => 2003-01-25 13:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Angry kid, scream at the sky
Nobody likes me, I want to die
Resentment and hatred builds in the brain
Cuts away at the scars that remain
Labeled an outcast, loser, no friends
He festers alone, no one defends
Channels aggression through attacks and through beatings
Sneak attack coming
Planned in lonely meetings
I’m coming for you, but you don’t believe
Disguised my intentions
A victim deceived
The bodies lie scattered in the words wrote by me
But never in real life
The killer in me
Was never released from the cage of restraint
The paper, my canvas, full of bloody paint
Severe tales of horror, resentment, and hate
Destroy in my dreams, but never my fate
For all of the memories, and all of the reasons
To crucify you for what I call treason
It was not in the cards to take someone’s life
But I’ve murdered in writing with my pen as the knife
By writing of hate, my mind opened to see
I made the right choices
The killer’s not me…
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Darkscorpio [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

The Killer in me

Contributed by Darkscorpio on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Angry kid, scream at the sky
Nobody likes me, I want to die
Resentment and hatred builds in the brain
Cuts away at the scars that remain
Labeled an outcast, loser, no friends
He festers alone, no one defends
Channels aggression through attacks and through beatings
Sneak attack coming
Planned in lonely meetings
I’m coming for you, but you don’t believe
Disguised my intentions
A victim deceived
The bodies lie scattered in the words wrote by me
But never in real life
The killer in me
Was never released from the cage of restraint
The paper, my canvas, full of bloody paint
Severe tales of horror, resentment, and hate
Destroy in my dreams, but never my fate
For all of the memories, and all of the reasons
To crucify you for what I call treason
It was not in the cards to take someone’s life
But I’ve murdered in writing with my pen as the knife
By writing of hate, my mind opened to see
I made the right choices
The killer’s not me…

Copyright Â© Darkscorpio ... [ 2003-01-25 13:20:00]
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Re: The Killer in me (User Rating: 1 )
by tier on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 02:28:57 PM AEST
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very good wording......

Re: The Killer in me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:49:05 PM AEST
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Wow, so much emotion and hatred. I enjoyed this a lot.

Bobo (Joel)

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