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where is the help I seek from above?
I try not to speak the words to strike,
but my guardian cries to me in the night.
He begs me to let his power out,
to show them what he is all about.
I need to temper, apease his lance,
or in the stuggle, lose balance.
Mortals betray.. lie, hurt, and harm;
the guardian wishes to show his charm.
Peace and Light is what I crave,
it will come when I open my grave.
This world it taunts-its words harrassing;
there will be no pain, no pain at my passing.
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No Pain at My Passing

Contributed by sararose1950 on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 09:32:29 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Betrayed by family,friends,and blood;
where is the help I seek from above?
I try not to speak the words to strike,
but my guardian cries to me in the night.
He begs me to let his power out,
to show them what he is all about.
I need to temper, apease his lance,
or in the stuggle, lose balance.
Mortals betray.. lie, hurt, and harm;
the guardian wishes to show his charm.
Peace and Light is what I crave,
it will come when I open my grave.
This world it taunts-its words harrassing;
there will be no pain, no pain at my passing.

Copyright © sararose1950 ... [ 2005-12-24 09:32:29]
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Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:36:08 PM AEST
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good write i know just what your saying

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 03:42:03 PM AEST
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Excellent write Sara. What you are going through is being experienced on this end.
Loss, cheat, betrayal.
But HE, experienced the same thing. and knows all about it.
Take heart! He watches over you and His omfort and mighty arm will never fail you and uphold you.
Great write!

Have a blessed Christmas Sara and a joyous one with lots of "Peace and Light.
Love
Elizabeth

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 05:06:04 AM AEST
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The actions of the weak are the test of the strong. They seem mighty in number, but are thin in the balance. Hold strong and never falter.

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Ari on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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excellent!!!

thank you for writing this

i wish you peace beyond your wildest dreams....

Ari

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 20th January 2006 @ 06:12:37 AM AEST
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well done

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:27:59 PM AEST
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This is most beautiful so sincere and thoughtful. Indeed a well crafted and truly
emotionaly defining peice of writting.

Ben

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by snowflake on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 06:19:28 PM AEST
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Such a wonderful Write i can relate thanks for sharing this
*~SnoWflAkE~*

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:01:33 PM AEST
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Sararose1950

WOW !

Father forgive them--they know not what they do.
A powerful write.
An open grave is the gateway to heaven--life to its fullest.

Sinned

Re: No Pain at My Passing (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:59:19 PM AEST
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there's so much to be said within these few words..
life..(a journey) can only be appeased by what we bring along with it...

B

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