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Array ( [sid] => 112008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Christmas Wish [time] => 2005-12-23 14:45:30 [hometext] => It's Not The Way You Think. . . [bodytext] => Getting stuck in the beautiful oblivion
of tortured screams
and unstitched seams.
Getting caught up in the moment
of unimportant emotions
and waves of the oceans.
STOP!!
Rewind the tape. . . PAUSE!!!
I'm caught in the rain!
FORWARD!!
Move on. . . and on. . .
and on. . .
DON'T LOOK BACK!!
This feeling is wack
I'm just feeling off track
I shouldn't be feeling this way
it't NOT just another day
It is a GOD FORSAKEN HOLIDAY!!
I am not another scrooge
im just a bit unglued
detatched from this reality
BUT NO!!! its just a mirage.
A collage of faces in a package laden crowd
All my senses on the line just put me face down
I didn't wanna feel this way
but I'm just so damn unhappy
I dont want any of your ****** packages
I just wanna be ****** happy!!

DAMMIT!! what is wrong with me??
SCREW IT!!! just screw it all!!!
WHY ME?? must I take this fall?
WHEN WILL?. . . WHEN WILL?. . .
When will I be happy?

This feeling is wack
I'm just feeling off track
I shouldn't be feeling this way
it't NOT just another day
It is a GOD FORSAKEN HOLIDAY!!
Something is missing
my heart is beating
off track
Like soda with no fizz
I'm feeling sorta flat.
Too much on my mind
REWIND!!!!


Getting stuck in the beautiful oblivion
of tortured screams
and unstitched seams.
Getting caught up in the moment
of unimportant emotions
and waves of the oceans. . .

and I drown. . .
I'm fallin down. . .
Save me baby. . .
Put me on your list. . .
Let me whisper to you my Christmas wish. . .

Close my eyes tight
Wish with all my might
I just want this tape to rewind
back to a better time
before this journey took place
my mistakes I wanna erase

MAKE ME STRONG!!!!
take away these demons!!!!!!!!
I. . . can't fight. . . I can't hold on. . .
Just let me lay down. . .
and Merry Christmas. . .
and to all. . .
a ****** good night!



~Kortnie~ [comments] => 1 [counter] => 530 [topic] => 13 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My Christmas Wish

Contributed by justme03 on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 02:45:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Getting stuck in the beautiful oblivion
of tortured screams
and unstitched seams.
Getting caught up in the moment
of unimportant emotions
and waves of the oceans.
STOP!!
Rewind the tape. . . PAUSE!!!
I'm caught in the rain!
FORWARD!!
Move on. . . and on. . .
and on. . .
DON'T LOOK BACK!!
This feeling is wack
I'm just feeling off track
I shouldn't be feeling this way
it't NOT just another day
It is a GOD FORSAKEN HOLIDAY!!
I am not another scrooge
im just a bit unglued
detatched from this reality
BUT NO!!! its just a mirage.
A collage of faces in a package laden crowd
All my senses on the line just put me face down
I didn't wanna feel this way
but I'm just so damn unhappy
I dont want any of your ****** packages
I just wanna be ****** happy!!

DAMMIT!! what is wrong with me??
SCREW IT!!! just screw it all!!!
WHY ME?? must I take this fall?
WHEN WILL?. . . WHEN WILL?. . .
When will I be happy?

This feeling is wack
I'm just feeling off track
I shouldn't be feeling this way
it't NOT just another day
It is a GOD FORSAKEN HOLIDAY!!
Something is missing
my heart is beating
off track
Like soda with no fizz
I'm feeling sorta flat.
Too much on my mind
REWIND!!!!


Getting stuck in the beautiful oblivion
of tortured screams
and unstitched seams.
Getting caught up in the moment
of unimportant emotions
and waves of the oceans. . .

and I drown. . .
I'm fallin down. . .
Save me baby. . .
Put me on your list. . .
Let me whisper to you my Christmas wish. . .

Close my eyes tight
Wish with all my might
I just want this tape to rewind
back to a better time
before this journey took place
my mistakes I wanna erase

MAKE ME STRONG!!!!
take away these demons!!!!!!!!
I. . . can't fight. . . I can't hold on. . .
Just let me lay down. . .
and Merry Christmas. . .
and to all. . .
a ****** good night!



~Kortnie~




Copyright © justme03 ... [ 2005-12-23 14:45:30]
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Re: My Christmas Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 03:06:02 AM AEST
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AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING....... pure genius!!!!!!! Excellent Poem 10/10 :D




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