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Array ( [sid] => 111759 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I looked in the mirror one night [time] => 2005-12-19 14:54:50 [hometext] => Just an experiment, tell me if it works [bodytext] => I can see my reflection.
It stares back
As if it is someone other than me
I see a siren
With wide eyes
And a bold nose
With lips shaped like a bow
Perhaps the words could be Eros’ arrows
Just maybe
And that face
So ovular, and pale
And my hair hangs around it
Dark and straight
Shimmers as a models might
I flip it and it falls down my back
I look in the mirror
A black camisole
Stretches around my breasts
And over my stomach which while flat with muscle
Is rounded with baby’s softness near the navel
And love on the side
I stand sideways and stare at myself
My shape melts away and I am someone
Smaller, lovelier.
I face the mirror
Curvy
Almost heavy
And almost strong
There’s a small sliver of pastel skin
Where the black top parts from the black bottoms
Teasing
I see
I relax then
Not posing
How is it
With no make up
No show
In these black cotton pajamas
I am finally beautiful
And no one is there to see it but me?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 492 [topic] => 30 [informant] => SeptChill [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
I looked in the mirror one night

Contributed by SeptChill on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 02:54:50 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



I can see my reflection.
It stares back
As if it is someone other than me
I see a siren
With wide eyes
And a bold nose
With lips shaped like a bow
Perhaps the words could be Eros’ arrows
Just maybe
And that face
So ovular, and pale
And my hair hangs around it
Dark and straight
Shimmers as a models might
I flip it and it falls down my back
I look in the mirror
A black camisole
Stretches around my breasts
And over my stomach which while flat with muscle
Is rounded with baby’s softness near the navel
And love on the side
I stand sideways and stare at myself
My shape melts away and I am someone
Smaller, lovelier.
I face the mirror
Curvy
Almost heavy
And almost strong
There’s a small sliver of pastel skin
Where the black top parts from the black bottoms
Teasing
I see
I relax then
Not posing
How is it
With no make up
No show
In these black cotton pajamas
I am finally beautiful
And no one is there to see it but me?




Copyright © SeptChill ... [ 2005-12-19 14:54:50]
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Re: I looked in the mirror one night (User Rating: 1 )
by cashncoe on Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 02:59:11 PM AEST
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dont know what kind of experiment it is but hey i liked it good job




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