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Array ( [sid] => 111471 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Treating Your Girl Right [time] => 2005-12-14 11:27:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Knowing what she wants to hear,
Knowing how to wipe her tears,
Knowing when to say them words,
Knowing not to call them birds,
Knowing how to make them smile,
Knowing how to make it last for the while,
Knowing when to say I do,
Knowing when to say I love you,
Knowing just what to say,
Knowing when to play,
Knowing her life like no other,
Knowing her better then her mother,
Knowing how to treat her right,
Knowing never to say goodnight.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stecks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Treating Your Girl Right

Contributed by stecks on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:27:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Knowing what she wants to hear,
Knowing how to wipe her tears,
Knowing when to say them words,
Knowing not to call them birds,
Knowing how to make them smile,
Knowing how to make it last for the while,
Knowing when to say I do,
Knowing when to say I love you,
Knowing just what to say,
Knowing when to play,
Knowing her life like no other,
Knowing her better then her mother,
Knowing how to treat her right,
Knowing never to say goodnight.




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Re: Treating Your Girl Right (User Rating: 1 )
by LostAmbition on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 01:11:07 PM AEST
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all the "knowing" was an eye sore
truth be told
still i feel yer emotion
respect is the biggest thing
have love and respect
seems the best ones dont
even get that


Re: Treating Your Girl Right (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 03:03:00 PM AEST
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I liked this and it seems your on the right path to making her happy and treating her right

the last line though

never to say goodnight I felt you were trying to rhyme which is fine but a word of advice
the waking moments and last moments of the day are the special always say goodnight and I love you

smiles
Michelle


Re: Treating Your Girl Right (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 04:36:19 PM AEST
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i liked ur poem, always speak from ur heart.... bump what everyone else says


Re: Treating Your Girl Right (User Rating: 1 )
by nannerz on Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 10:21:51 PM AEST
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wicked




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