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Array ( [sid] => 111421 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => annoyed void [time] => 2005-12-13 16:19:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
this blood thirsty scream the surreal dream all dried flakes on your wall

light going fast as you feel the wind pass cluching as you fall

butterflies fly and we all live with lies this is how we talk

but the rumours you build while standing on your hill you act but dont walk

escaping hells grasp as it singes you mask the picture of your illusion

but you force your self in even if you dont win this is your dillusion

wonders we walk but miracles there not just gadgets and shinny toys

but sin on the tube is just beyond rude showing to girls and boys

dried like a flake or a leaf that you rake this is how i feel

moisture is gone no tear to be found lost in all thats unreal

dreams of man and there sinister plan all for the glory of cash

stab in the back or steal from the rack freedom will never last

small and a annoyed were swallowed by this void a vision so intact

but with anger we stomp and violence we romp children we do act

but in this we all truly wish that this wasnt a fact of life

as long as we dont play we the steal everyday we wont get sliced by the
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
annoyed void

Contributed by lostrelic on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 04:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




this blood thirsty scream the surreal dream all dried flakes on your wall

light going fast as you feel the wind pass cluching as you fall

butterflies fly and we all live with lies this is how we talk

but the rumours you build while standing on your hill you act but dont walk

escaping hells grasp as it singes you mask the picture of your illusion

but you force your self in even if you dont win this is your dillusion

wonders we walk but miracles there not just gadgets and shinny toys

but sin on the tube is just beyond rude showing to girls and boys

dried like a flake or a leaf that you rake this is how i feel

moisture is gone no tear to be found lost in all thats unreal

dreams of man and there sinister plan all for the glory of cash

stab in the back or steal from the rack freedom will never last

small and a annoyed were swallowed by this void a vision so intact

but with anger we stomp and violence we romp children we do act

but in this we all truly wish that this wasnt a fact of life

as long as we dont play we the steal everyday we wont get sliced by the




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Re: annoyed void (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 05:36:20 PM AEST
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good write nice flow i like it


Re: annoyed void (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 10:13:51 AM AEST
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well done




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