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Secrets
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:00:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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They tear people apart And they bring people together You don't tell anyone For fear they'll come back and bite you in the butt But we all have them You just don't know them They can be bad Or they can be good But either or, they are always there A secret about someone A secret about you They are attractive And they are dangerous What a power they hold on us Some secrets so powerful Men die in its shadow The magnatuide, the strenght Even the smallest secret Can cause one to do strange things To keep it quiet We do not keep secrets They keep us
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2005-12-13 12:00:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Secrets
(User Rating: 1 ) by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:35:04 PM AEST (User
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| I like the last 2 lines, definately made a powerful ending. |
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Re: Secrets
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen54 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:18:14 PM AEST (User
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That is so true.
keep it up!
-Jen |
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Re: Secrets
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:53:02 AM AEST (User
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i agree those last two lines were powerful and it really makes you think about it.. I mean i believe that secrets do keep us and we are forever their slave.. great poem..
christina |
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