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Array ( [sid] => 111358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Left My Side [time] => 2005-12-12 19:24:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Look out the window and star into space.
Watch the moon take complex forms in the black night sky.
I can’t help but wonder are you looking down on me?
Do you see all the pain you’re putting me through?
Do you realize that I need you to get me through this?
The stars seem to twinkle sarcastically, laughing at me.
In the distance I see one fall and make a wish in time.
Can’t you help me out?
Why are you putting me through this?
What motive is behind such madness?
Atmospheric pressures rise and fall bringing in the winds from the west.
The tree branch scrapes my window ever so gently but hard enough to make an eerie feeling rise inside.
What am I supposed to learn from this pain?
Why am I here?
Why do I feel like you don’t care?
Silence falls finally defeating that eerie feeling.
But someone is whispering to me from somewhere above.
I am walking with you through your dark times.
I am holding you close but you won’t let me inside.
Find your heart and I will mend it.
Find your soul and I will tend to its wounds.
You’re not alone.
I never left your side.
I am here for you son just open your eyes.
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Never Left My Side

Contributed by brokenheartsbleed on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:24:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Look out the window and star into space.
Watch the moon take complex forms in the black night sky.
I can’t help but wonder are you looking down on me?
Do you see all the pain you’re putting me through?
Do you realize that I need you to get me through this?
The stars seem to twinkle sarcastically, laughing at me.
In the distance I see one fall and make a wish in time.
Can’t you help me out?
Why are you putting me through this?
What motive is behind such madness?
Atmospheric pressures rise and fall bringing in the winds from the west.
The tree branch scrapes my window ever so gently but hard enough to make an eerie feeling rise inside.
What am I supposed to learn from this pain?
Why am I here?
Why do I feel like you don’t care?
Silence falls finally defeating that eerie feeling.
But someone is whispering to me from somewhere above.
I am walking with you through your dark times.
I am holding you close but you won’t let me inside.
Find your heart and I will mend it.
Find your soul and I will tend to its wounds.
You’re not alone.
I never left your side.
I am here for you son just open your eyes.




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Re: Never Left My Side (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 07:31:31 PM AEST
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very nice write. i really enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work.
-trini


Re: Never Left My Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 08:42:53 PM AEST
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That's nice... in the begining I was a little lost... but good ending I like it.

Aq.


Re: Never Left My Side (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 12:21:49 PM AEST
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This is quite sad, especially the ending, but very touching too...All the questions give this piece a raw, in-the-moment feel, but it works to your advantage here, I think. Nicely done.



Scorp.


Re: Never Left My Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST
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well done




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