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Array ( [sid] => 111156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Beg Your Pardon [time] => 2005-12-08 22:02:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Blame him
The one over there
Sitting under that tree
Cap tilted
Stringy hair
Looking innocent
Stonefaced
Without a care
In the world

An apple he eats
Green tea leafs
A rip in his shirt
A stain on his shoe
A mirror
Hung from the branch
Checking his teeth
For whiteness
Cant withstand
The bellyache
A strawberry shake of a man
Pleasant and at ease

But not so easy
Get away with it
A pardon
My French,
But who the
Where the
Do you get the
Nerves
Your dirt

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I Beg Your Pardon

Contributed by Mangos on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Blame him
The one over there
Sitting under that tree
Cap tilted
Stringy hair
Looking innocent
Stonefaced
Without a care
In the world

An apple he eats
Green tea leafs
A rip in his shirt
A stain on his shoe
A mirror
Hung from the branch
Checking his teeth
For whiteness
Cant withstand
The bellyache
A strawberry shake of a man
Pleasant and at ease

But not so easy
Get away with it
A pardon
My French,
But who the
Where the
Do you get the
Nerves
Your dirt

__
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Copyright © Mangos ... [ 2005-12-08 22:02:20]
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Re: I Beg Your Pardon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 02:58:25 PM AEST
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wow, very intence glad i'm not on the receiving of this " A strawberry shake of a man " what a great line, i had a flash back 2 a line of similar intensity, of seals and crofts yellow dirt, " A sandwich of a man " this it the best line i' ve heard since that time, great poem . . .

Ben

Re: I Beg Your Pardon (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 11th December 2005 @ 12:37:55 AM AEST
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Now who went and cheesed you off???

You have some good ouch-factor bits in here, and you know I'm a fan of sarcasm ; )
I like the way you wrote this, the flow suits the mood, and it still keeps your tell-tale signature...lol

Scorp.

Re: I Beg Your Pardon (User Rating: 1 )
by jessejames on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:30:28 PM AEST
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good write

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