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Array ( [sid] => 111155 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I need you Jesus [time] => 2005-12-08 21:57:02 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => I need you Jesus to shine
down with all your might
with your majestic glow
that could light up the night

I've been so lost in this world
trying to find my way
I know I don't try hard enough
and I hardly ever pray

so I need you Jesus to forgive me
for all the mistakes I have made
cause it's you and only you
who makes me less afraid

I've spent lonely nights with the devil
playing pool and drinking beer
sometimes he does a good job
bringing me to his level

so I need you Jesus to protect me
from the evil one
and I need you to let me know
when Ì'm doing more than having fun

sometimes it's hard to tell
the good and the bad apart
that's why I need you Jesus
so please come into my heart

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 65 [informant] => CaseyRedman [notes] => .....edited for spelling as requested-by mod_6....04-05-06 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

I need you Jesus

Contributed by CaseyRedman on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 09:57:02 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I need you Jesus to shine
down with all your might
with your majestic glow
that could light up the night

I've been so lost in this world
trying to find my way
I know I don't try hard enough
and I hardly ever pray

so I need you Jesus to forgive me
for all the mistakes I have made
cause it's you and only you
who makes me less afraid

I've spent lonely nights with the devil
playing pool and drinking beer
sometimes he does a good job
bringing me to his level

so I need you Jesus to protect me
from the evil one
and I need you to let me know
when Ì'm doing more than having fun

sometimes it's hard to tell
the good and the bad apart
that's why I need you Jesus
so please come into my heart

Copyright Â© CaseyRedman ... [ 2005-12-08 21:57:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I need you Jesus (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:02:32 PM AEST
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A heartfelt plea. May He guide u to the right path and always shine a light for you.
A heartdfelt and wonderfully penned poem. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
*hugs*
~sue~

Re: I need you Jesus (User Rating: 1 )
by jada on Thursday, 8th December 2005 @ 10:24:55 PM AEST
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i like this not many people like yo read about jesus so you go girl i know what you saying keepp the faith and keep writing too god blees u

Re: I need you Jesus (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 10:20:54 AM AEST
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Yes indeed a heartfelt and beautiful plea.
Just hang on to Jesus, and declare Him before the world.
Hugs
Elizabeth

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