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Array ( [sid] => 111077 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => But A While [time] => 2005-12-07 05:25:34 [hometext] => To those I deeply love [bodytext] => Laying there Rebecca
Painted rosy cheeks
Pretty white dress
All ready for dance
I linger

But awhile

A little white chest
Presented to who
Joey so still in lace
Pain fills a mother breast

But Awhile

Curtis on Christmas eve
Maternal lives but doesn't survive
Pain overcomes mothers heart
Depression no one could believe

But Awhile

Aunt uncle mother father
Time quickly passes
Yet time lingers
Sisters and brothers

But awhile

Kind words said then forgoten
A friend is called
Then another
Memories then and when

But a while

A mother leaves at forty-one
A son sobs uncontrollable
Daughters mother one another
Toughtness covers the son

But awhile

A father becomes great great
Meanness gives way to a little child
Love is tender at ninty-two
Then life has met it's date

But awhile

Here we linger
Toil and tears
Smiles of happiness
Thinking not of creations finger

But awhile

Time stands still
Breath our spirit
Taken away
Eternity doing His will

But awhile

Time is but a thousand years
Together we sing His praise
A thousand years is but a day
In an instant no more tears

Forever a smile
Yet here we toil
In happiness and pain
Never thinking it is but awhile


Sinned




[comments] => 5 [counter] => 510 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Sinned [notes] => ....edited for spelling as requested...mod_6 17-10-06..... [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
But A While

Contributed by Sinned on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 05:25:34 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Laying there Rebecca
Painted rosy cheeks
Pretty white dress
All ready for dance
I linger

But awhile

A little white chest
Presented to who
Joey so still in lace
Pain fills a mother breast

But Awhile

Curtis on Christmas eve
Maternal lives but doesn't survive
Pain overcomes mothers heart
Depression no one could believe

But Awhile

Aunt uncle mother father
Time quickly passes
Yet time lingers
Sisters and brothers

But awhile

Kind words said then forgoten
A friend is called
Then another
Memories then and when

But a while

A mother leaves at forty-one
A son sobs uncontrollable
Daughters mother one another
Toughtness covers the son

But awhile

A father becomes great great
Meanness gives way to a little child
Love is tender at ninty-two
Then life has met it's date

But awhile

Here we linger
Toil and tears
Smiles of happiness
Thinking not of creations finger

But awhile

Time stands still
Breath our spirit
Taken away
Eternity doing His will

But awhile

Time is but a thousand years
Together we sing His praise
A thousand years is but a day
In an instant no more tears

Forever a smile
Yet here we toil
In happiness and pain
Never thinking it is but awhile


Sinned








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Re: But A While (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:31:45 AM AEST
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v nice :-)


Re: But A While (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 09:23:02 AM AEST
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Impressive write, great emotion.
Jeff


Re: But A While (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:52:07 PM AEST
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wow, I like the time-line aspect to it, it reads like a story.
Impressive.


Re: But A While (User Rating: 1 )
by STECKS on Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 02:59:29 PM AEST
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very well done, Emotion can be felt. Very Nice


Re: But A While (User Rating: 1 )
by STECKS on Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 12:05:42 PM AEST
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Very Nice. Emotion was definitly felt. Keep up the nice write.




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