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Array ( [sid] => 110519 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blind [time] => 2005-11-28 15:07:03 [hometext] => Wrote this after the person I liked started dating someone else. I'm over it now, actually he's one of my best friends, but I still like the poem. [bodytext] => It hurts to see that you haven't seen
I'm doing back-flips for you
It hurts to hear your uninterested voice
Little words cut me deep
It hurts to touch empty space
Were you ever even there?
It hurts that you never saw the signs
I'm so obvious
It hurts that you never caught my eyes
They always seemed drawn to you

It hurts that you're not blind and probably saw it all
I'm such a fool
But it hurts even more to know you're not blind
So I'll just pretend that you are

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Blind

Contributed by jessie53067 on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:07:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

It hurts to see that you haven't seen
I'm doing back-flips for you
It hurts to hear your uninterested voice
Little words cut me deep
It hurts to touch empty space
Were you ever even there?
It hurts that you never saw the signs
I'm so obvious
It hurts that you never caught my eyes
They always seemed drawn to you

It hurts that you're not blind and probably saw it all
I'm such a fool
But it hurts even more to know you're not blind
So I'll just pretend that you are

Copyright © jessie53067 ... [ 2005-11-28 15:07:03]
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Re: Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:14:17 PM AEST
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I'm doing back-flips for you

I love that line. I can't explain why, but I think it's the best line in the poem.

The rest of the poem is also good, if a little repetitive. Try looking for other ways to say 'It hurts' to make the read a little more interesting.

Good write,
Phil xxx

Re: Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by dalamar on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 02:58:34 PM AEST
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I am so sorry. I really had no Idea at the time. I was mess then but you helped me out of it. It is better that we are just friends because I tell my friends everything before I tell some on that I am in a realationship with.

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