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Array ( [sid] => 110348 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't mention it !! [time] => 2005-11-25 03:17:44 [hometext] => A poem about how I feel others view me [bodytext] => You’re boring, you say the same things every day,
It’d be best if you shut up, or just go away,
Your pain is not my pain, so why do you go on?
Pull yourself together because you’re not the chosen one,

Get a grip of yourself, because nobody had died,
Stop bleating about things, you’ve not even tried,
Smile and be happy, for worse things happen at sea,
Just stop being so selfish and thinking ‘me me me’,

You’ll see them one day, perhaps in a few years,
In the meantime get on, there’s no need for tears,
I know you miss them, and they mean the world to you,
But for Christ’s sake what do you want me to do?

So I hope this little talk has put you straight,
And has made you see that you should accept your fate,
If I get five minutes I might think of your pain,
But for now I’d be grateful if you don’t mention it again.
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Don't mention it !!

Contributed by Dandy on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:17:44 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

You’re boring, you say the same things every day,
It’d be best if you shut up, or just go away,
Your pain is not my pain, so why do you go on?
Pull yourself together because you’re not the chosen one,

Get a grip of yourself, because nobody had died,
Stop bleating about things, you’ve not even tried,
Smile and be happy, for worse things happen at sea,
Just stop being so selfish and thinking ‘me me me’,

You’ll see them one day, perhaps in a few years,
In the meantime get on, there’s no need for tears,
I know you miss them, and they mean the world to you,
But for Christ’s sake what do you want me to do?

So I hope this little talk has put you straight,
And has made you see that you should accept your fate,
If I get five minutes I might think of your pain,
But for now I’d be grateful if you don’t mention it again.

Copyright © Dandy ... [ 2005-11-25 03:17:44]
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Re: Don't mention it !! (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:42:23 PM AEST
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harsh.raw.real.

great job.

Re: Don't mention it !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 05:42:03 PM AEST
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Dandy, very painful, but are THEY right? or are THEY the problem?

Re: Don't mention it !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 05:42:54 PM AEST
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Yes, indeed. Raw stuff.
But if your friends' vision is so limited, you can always show them your rear side and invite them to kiss it.

Great job this!

Elizabeth "DANDY"

Re: Don't mention it !! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 06:47:38 PM AEST
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Long suffering from my little book of Apples of Gold by C.R. Gibson... an unknown author wrote...

There is a field for critics, no doubt, but we don't remember seeing statues of any of them in the Hall of Fame.

Be well my friend, you are ever loved, never forget that. Your view of yourself must be lovely, look into your hearts mirror and rejoice you are alive. Here is a nice motto for you to think of...say it each morning.. from me to you... Raquel Leah

"Dear Lord, At least you woke me up this morning, be it me who bores others, my prayer is that I make you happy, this is my brand new start!"

Re: Don't mention it !! (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 07:22:34 PM AEST
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heh aw, i'm sure they dont feel that way. good poem anyways! ^_^

Re: Don't mention it !! (User Rating: 1 )
by shortcut on Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 04:45:59 PM AEST
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Hey I just divorced someone that sounds just like this-LOL! Love the honesty here, keep up the good work!

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