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Array ( [sid] => 109835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorry Friend [time] => 2005-11-16 01:33:18 [hometext] => I wrote this poem to my best friend not long ago while we were arguing. I was/am at the point where I wonder what's best for us [bodytext] => I hope you're ******* happy
With all the lies you've told
You make me feel worthless
Like something you just sold

You think you're so damn special
You think that I don't cry
You ignore me
Like you want me to just die

What do you want from me?
What's done is done
I can't take it back
It's only just begun

You say I'm a liar
When my honesty got us here
When I think of you
I'm stricken with fear

I don't want to lose you
I don't want you to hurt
But as of this day lately
You make me feel like dirt

It's not working out
And this makes me cry
I hate to tell you this
But it might be good bye [comments] => 4 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 52 [informant] => tacit_pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Sorry Friend

Contributed by tacit_pain on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:33:18 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I hope you're ******* happy
With all the lies you've told
You make me feel worthless
Like something you just sold

You think you're so damn special
You think that I don't cry
You ignore me
Like you want me to just die

What do you want from me?
What's done is done
I can't take it back
It's only just begun

You say I'm a liar
When my honesty got us here
When I think of you
I'm stricken with fear

I don't want to lose you
I don't want you to hurt
But as of this day lately
You make me feel like dirt

It's not working out
And this makes me cry
I hate to tell you this
But it might be good bye

Copyright © tacit_pain ... [ 2005-11-16 01:33:18]
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Re: Sorry Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 01:43:52 AM AEST
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awwwwwwww a very sad poem!!!

but friends are suppossed to forgive

and forget!! hope you and your friend can

work it out!! good write tho.

Re: Sorry Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 05:03:49 AM AEST
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I know the feeling..me and my friend had exactly the same problem but we managed to sort it out...hope everything works out for you 2! Good write thanx!

Re: Sorry Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:17:44 AM AEST
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I lost my best friend earlier this year...she stabbed me in the back by trying to split my family up... I had to make the hard decision of walking away from her....it hurts so much but some times it is for the best.....this is a very emotional write thank you for sharing xx

Re: Sorry Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:50:20 AM AEST
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Hmmm...did you try to make friends with the same person as me??? Geesh...I know this scenario, and it's not a pleasant ending. This is a seriously emotive write, and your hurt feelings jumped out with every word. Good job, and I love that ending. I'd say move on...

Scorp.
(Who doesn't think people like this, are friends at all....)

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