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because he'll not only try to destroy your life, but also the lives of all those you love.
And once he is awakend, from his resting place.
You will be embarked on a journey, that so few of us seem to escape.
But if you ever put that beast back in it's place, becareful never to awaken him again.
Because next time he'll come after you with all he has, and it will be twice as hard to
to put him back again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 408 [topic] => 66 [informant] => kpsniper2003 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

The beast within

Contributed by kpsniper2003 on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:35:49 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Becareful not to awaken the beast that lays within us all,
because he'll not only try to destroy your life, but also the lives of all those you love.
And once he is awakend, from his resting place.
You will be embarked on a journey, that so few of us seem to escape.
But if you ever put that beast back in it's place, becareful never to awaken him again.
Because next time he'll come after you with all he has, and it will be twice as hard to
to put him back again.

Copyright © kpsniper2003 ... [ 2005-11-15 11:35:49]
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Re: The beast within (User Rating: 1 )
by Dreama on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 01:30:42 PM AEST
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interesting stanza style.. use of full stops and commas in particular..
i like it, especially because of the ambiguity of what part of oneself the beast your refering to is. i can relate.
good write, keep em up
Pete

Re: The beast within (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 02:28:44 PM AEST
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...right on, Bro!

...said with vivid energy...

...appreciated...

ron...enigma

Re: The beast within (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:27:06 PM AEST
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its hard for a lot of people to talk or write about something like this...nice write

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