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That Love-hate Thing
Contributed by
lil_noel09
on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 08:49:01 PM in AEST
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I hate you I hate you
Down deep inside
You make me so angry
To your will I could never abide
I hate you I hate you
Your stupid pride
You are so cruel
I wish I had died
I hate you I hate you
I hate you so much
I recoil, revolt
At your slightest touch
But what's this
It happened so fast
What has happened
To all of the past
Suddenly...
I love you I love you
Down deep inside
I'd do anything
To be by your side
I love you I love you
Even your pride
I love it so dearly
With you I reside
I love you I love you
I love you so much
I wait, I long
For your slightest touch
To think I once hated you
Brings sadness to my heart
And as the tears begin to fall
You say "Don't cry for from you I will never part"
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Re: That Love-hate Thing
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by english-pea-pelter on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 09:03:41 PM AEST
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Very well done. Another good one. Well composed and thought out.
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Re: That Love-hate Thing
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by assassinatorgirl on
Sunday, 27th November 2005 @ 12:24:23 AM AEST
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| very sweet, i like it :) |
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Re: That Love-hate Thing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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A deep and sad write written with such depth. You've poured out ur emotions well in this.
The rhyming and flow of the poem are done really well. Keep penning down ur emotions.
*hugs*
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