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[aid] => mick
[title] => The perfect moment
[time] => 2005-11-09 12:59:46
[hometext] => Yeah... um... I don't know how good it is... so yeah... sorry if it sux
[bodytext] => They're sitting there together Just staring at the stars There they are Sitting there looking at the stars Talking about the future. They've been together a year She's known she's loved him for a long time When she told him he said he wasn't sure She hasn't bothered him about since But she always makes sure he knows she loves him. While they're sitting there Staring at the starts Talking about the future He turns to look at her She doesn't look back at him She just sits there. She wonders what he's doing They sit there in silence for what seems like forever She finally turns to him and asks him why he's looking at her He says she's too beatiful not to look at. This makes her blush a little She tells him she loves him He doesn't say anything By now she's used to this. She leans over to kiss him then turns back to the stars He moves over to her Kneeling right in front of her Blocking her view She doesn't say anything just looks at him He looks at her and realzes she's everything he wants He can't believe he didn't say it sooner Realize it sooner But now he finally says "I love you." She just looks at him to shocked to talk She didn't expect this She loves him but she didn't think he loved her back He looks hurt that she doesn't say anything So she says "I love you too." and kisses him. It was the perfect moment. He moves to sit beside her again They just sit there all night holding hands Looking up at the stars Each of them knowing this is the one The one person they want to spend the rest of their lives with. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 31 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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