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Array ( [sid] => 109330 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Words Of Us [time] => 2005-11-08 18:33:56 [hometext] => Some poetry I wrote 2 years ago in 8th grade after a painful breakup. [bodytext] => Memorys of us
Brings tears to my eyes
I can't help but think
All your words were just lies

Words of marriage
Words of life
The words "I love you"
Then me as your wife

We had it all planned out
Then from me is was taken away
I read the note you slipped me
And still I don't know what to say

Last night
I cried myself to sleep
I don't know what to do
But sit here and weep

I'm tired of crying
Atlast no more
I'm going to sleep one last time
But on the floor

I cried myself to sleep
But the color was red
For the last time
My eternal bed [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 36 [informant] => tacit_pain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Words Of Us

Contributed by tacit_pain on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 06:33:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Memorys of us
Brings tears to my eyes
I can't help but think
All your words were just lies

Words of marriage
Words of life
The words "I love you"
Then me as your wife

We had it all planned out
Then from me is was taken away
I read the note you slipped me
And still I don't know what to say

Last night
I cried myself to sleep
I don't know what to do
But sit here and weep

I'm tired of crying
Atlast no more
I'm going to sleep one last time
But on the floor

I cried myself to sleep
But the color was red
For the last time
My eternal bed

Copyright © tacit_pain ... [ 2005-11-08 18:33:56]
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Re: Words Of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by memories_mist on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:33:52 PM AEST
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A very emotional write with a sense of great pain entwined in it. I really liked this one and look forward to reading more.

Re: Words Of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 07:52:25 PM AEST
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good write, definitely at such a young age.

Re: Words Of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 11:13:10 PM AEST
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for an 8th grader, you certainly did have a lot more talent than ive seen from many writers on this site. excellent work to say the least. i liked the title most in this, i think it was creative enough to even be the centerpiece.

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