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thoughts of our conversation still linger in my head.

All the What if's come rushing back into play,
should I have saved the truth for another day.

We both said so many things, we got off track,
Now I lie here thinking how I can get you back.

I made your heart bleed, did I call your bluff,
Will a simple apology be just enough.

A door slams shut, what brought you back,
you slam things around as you begin to pack.

I beg for forgiveness, words flow from within,
you stand back and stare at me like I didnt even
begin.

Hate-filled eyes burn through me, I fill with fright,
How do I make this right.

Glass shatters above me tears flow down my cheeks,
what has he done, I lay there in blood-soaked sheets.

The smell of dirt surrounds me, my lungs hard to fill,
I stare up at him, is this all for real.

Everything goes dark and I'm all alone again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 39 [informant] => memories_mist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

When Sorry Isn't Enough

Contributed by memories_mist on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 10:11:31 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I wakeup in the morning to a cold and lonely bed,
thoughts of our conversation still linger in my head.

All the What if's come rushing back into play,
should I have saved the truth for another day.

We both said so many things, we got off track,
Now I lie here thinking how I can get you back.

I made your heart bleed, did I call your bluff,
Will a simple apology be just enough.

A door slams shut, what brought you back,
you slam things around as you begin to pack.

I beg for forgiveness, words flow from within,
you stand back and stare at me like I didnt even
begin.

Hate-filled eyes burn through me, I fill with fright,
How do I make this right.

Glass shatters above me tears flow down my cheeks,
what has he done, I lay there in blood-soaked sheets.

The smell of dirt surrounds me, my lungs hard to fill,
I stare up at him, is this all for real.

Everything goes dark and I'm all alone again.

Copyright © memories_mist ... [ 2005-11-08 10:11:31]
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Re: When Sorry Isn't Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 11:55:37 AM AEST
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a very sad but powerful write

Re: When Sorry Isn't Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 12:06:27 PM AEST
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i had visual images of this happening. This has such power to make such vivid imagery...you are truly talented :)

Re: When Sorry Isn't Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 12:35:41 PM AEST
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Nice write,Please check out some of my poems!

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