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Array ( [sid] => 109158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Cure [time] => 2005-11-06 01:38:27 [hometext] => A poetry dedicated to those who live their life on the bottle...break away,there's more to life than that..... [bodytext] => I remember your eyes,the colour of the sea,
When you held your hand out to me,
I remember the look in your ocean eyes,
When we both promise to break from this and 'fly'.

We would fly away from our nest,
To touch the sky,to live in zest,
To skim the surface of a flowing river,
To listen and brave through any thunder.

We would find the sun golden arrows,
We would track down every single rainbow,
We would circle snowy mountain peaks,
We would make majestic beasts timid and meek.

Dreams and promises to be made,
You and I vow to be among the great,
To break away from our sorrowful existence,
Where alcohol and tears are a constant.

We would start anew and forget,
How liquor tastes, how high we can get,
With dreams and promises like these,we could thoroughly explore life,
Only in continuous hopes and dreams,we could end our strife. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Crimsonflame [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
The Cure

Contributed by Crimsonflame on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I remember your eyes,the colour of the sea,
When you held your hand out to me,
I remember the look in your ocean eyes,
When we both promise to break from this and 'fly'.

We would fly away from our nest,
To touch the sky,to live in zest,
To skim the surface of a flowing river,
To listen and brave through any thunder.

We would find the sun golden arrows,
We would track down every single rainbow,
We would circle snowy mountain peaks,
We would make majestic beasts timid and meek.

Dreams and promises to be made,
You and I vow to be among the great,
To break away from our sorrowful existence,
Where alcohol and tears are a constant.

We would start anew and forget,
How liquor tastes, how high we can get,
With dreams and promises like these,we could thoroughly explore life,
Only in continuous hopes and dreams,we could end our strife.




Copyright © Crimsonflame ... [ 2005-11-06 01:38:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Cure (User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 11:03:51 AM AEST
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very good i liked reading this, i can semi identify not the drink thoughxx


Re: The Cure (User Rating: 1 )
by kaysea on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 02:02:56 PM AEST
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married to an alcoholic i can so relate.
it was so so hard but he did it and life is good.
hes just sorry he` didnt do it sooner, he missed so much.


Re: The Cure (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 05:27:50 PM AEST
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Such an inspiring uplifting write. Yes there is so much more to life . It takes alot of guts and determination to kick the habit.
A sensational poem filled with high hopes and determination. Well done and may your days always be bright.
*hugs*
sue


Re: The Cure (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 08:12:57 AM AEST
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A beautiful work! Your poetry flows a lot easier in this one than in your earlier ones, I think. Once again, I love your choice of words, they amaze me each time.
Take care.
David




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