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Array ( [sid] => 108804 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Girl Next Door [time] => 2005-10-31 10:49:42 [hometext] => Hey, Let me know what you think of this. Oh YOU KNOW who you are....this is about you! I THANK YOU SO MUCH......even though we are just friends! *I havent written in some time* hope its ok [bodytext] => I apologize for my Feelings,
Which may be wrong? Or may be right?
But when I have to say something,
I gotta write.

#As the night grows old,
and my mind starts to race,
I hear your voice,
as if we were, face to face.#

Your Holding me
in your tender embrace.
I Watch you smile,
while I caress your face.

THEN I AWAKE
and She'd vanished without a trace!

Though its been said,
That Things may never be,
There is no way ill ever stop being,
WHO I WANT TO BE!

We were good at what we did,
invisible to he and she,
I've always hated drama,
why wont people Just let me be?

Just choose your friends with care
and watch them like a hawk,
Listen to what is going on around you,
and keep them on the clock!


You made me feel wanted,
If only for a blink of an eye,
You even seemed attracted to me,
without getting high?
Have I been dreaming?
Or Am I stoned?
you thanked me for something.........
for the Skills that I had shown? *L*

The Girl Next Door,...
is who you are to me
quick to help someone out,
and even Quicker to knock them to thier knees.

Your like a rare flower, thats outgrown all the rest
with little use power
and still you put them to the test.
Your voice is sweet and comforting,
your skin is o..... so soft.
but if ya ever need anyone or anything at all................
YOU know, I'll break you off!

,You've been there for everyone,
especialy when you are needed,
I have had your back since I met you,
cause I know you get mistreated.

You have helped me out,
time and time again,
we've always had good times together,
since our friendship just began
.
I can take any amount of ********* thrown at me now,
because without good friends,
life is a never ending frown.

You Guided me out of my dark past,
and you saw a side of me that,
I have never known,
a caring. funloving guy that doesnt want to be alone
You took me from the darkness, into the BRIGHT UNKNOWN!.

#When the night grows old,
and my mind begins to race,
I fantasisze; once again,
I'll hear her voice........ as we embrace....#








~Love, Peace and Afro Grease~




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Girl Next Door

Contributed by Tatikaze on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 10:49:42 AM in AEST
Topic: secrets



I apologize for my Feelings,
Which may be wrong? Or may be right?
But when I have to say something,
I gotta write.

#As the night grows old,
and my mind starts to race,
I hear your voice,
as if we were, face to face.#

Your Holding me
in your tender embrace.
I Watch you smile,
while I caress your face.

THEN I AWAKE
and She'd vanished without a trace!

Though its been said,
That Things may never be,
There is no way ill ever stop being,
WHO I WANT TO BE!

We were good at what we did,
invisible to he and she,
I've always hated drama,
why wont people Just let me be?

Just choose your friends with care
and watch them like a hawk,
Listen to what is going on around you,
and keep them on the clock!


You made me feel wanted,
If only for a blink of an eye,
You even seemed attracted to me,
without getting high?
Have I been dreaming?
Or Am I stoned?
you thanked me for something.........
for the Skills that I had shown? *L*

The Girl Next Door,...
is who you are to me
quick to help someone out,
and even Quicker to knock them to thier knees.

Your like a rare flower, thats outgrown all the rest
with little use power
and still you put them to the test.
Your voice is sweet and comforting,
your skin is o..... so soft.
but if ya ever need anyone or anything at all................
YOU know, I'll break you off!

,You've been there for everyone,
especialy when you are needed,
I have had your back since I met you,
cause I know you get mistreated.

You have helped me out,
time and time again,
we've always had good times together,
since our friendship just began
.
I can take any amount of ********* thrown at me now,
because without good friends,
life is a never ending frown.

You Guided me out of my dark past,
and you saw a side of me that,
I have never known,
a caring. funloving guy that doesnt want to be alone
You took me from the darkness, into the BRIGHT UNKNOWN!.

#When the night grows old,
and my mind begins to race,
I fantasisze; once again,
I'll hear her voice........ as we embrace....#








~Love, Peace and Afro Grease~








Copyright © Tatikaze ... [ 2005-10-31 10:49:42]
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Re: Girl Next Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Tatikaze on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:53:57 PM AEST
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Is this a little two forward?


Re: Girl Next Door (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 04:40:07 PM AEST
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this is such a beautiful poem i was fighting to hold back the tears well done keep it up youll get through this
luv
jenni
xxx


Re: Girl Next Door (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 05:44:02 PM AEST
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This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a while.




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