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[sid] => 108736
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Listen Up!
[time] => 2005-10-30 00:59:56
[hometext] => You know who you are...
[bodytext] => Don't make me embarrass you, and announce your name
playing with me is a deadly game...
Doling out 'one's' that are not deserved
you thought was sneaky, but it was observed
Make me an enemy, and you're sure to pay
revenge will be served, without delay
Dear poetess I assure you, I am not the one
for you to fool with, the games have begun...
Pack up your bible and say a prayer
keep it up, I beg, I dare...
Immaturity has no place here.
[comments] => 24
[counter] => 503
[topic] => 55
[informant] => hauntedscorp
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[score] => 120
[ratings] => 26
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => dedicatedpoems
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Listen Up!
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 12:59:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't make me embarrass you, and announce your name
playing with me is a deadly game...
Doling out 'one's' that are not deserved
you thought was sneaky, but it was observed
Make me an enemy, and you're sure to pay
revenge will be served, without delay
Dear poetess I assure you, I am not the one
for you to fool with, the games have begun...
Pack up your bible and say a prayer
keep it up, I beg, I dare...
Immaturity has no place here.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-10-30 00:59:56]
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:12:49 AM AEST
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Normally I wouldn't advise having a poem about a site member like this - but this one made me smile, because if someone's doing that, it is so deserved. I wonder if it's the same person has been sniping me. Frankly I think the "points" thing should go.
Them's "fightin' words" scorp and tastefully done too!
Blessings, J. |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:21:49 AM AEST
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Well... your not as nice and innocent as I thought are you scorpy lol. *Remembers to be nice*. Great poem, you may intimidate me now, but none the less! Loved the poem.
-Cassy |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:38:46 AM AEST
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Hmmm I wonder who she is. It's sounds tragic though.
Funny write non-the-less.
Jane~ |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 02:14:48 AM AEST
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| I'd hate to be the person this stinger is directed at, eh, Scorp? -_-, |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 03:22:19 AM AEST
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Remind me not to **** u off.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 03:31:44 AM AEST
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Gah...what a letdown...I don't feel special anymore -_-,
Best Wishes,
Jackie |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 03:45:51 AM AEST
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LOL sorry L_T...you didn't inspire this one :P
We may just see you turn that leaf yet ; )
Scorp. |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 04:35:14 AM AEST
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There is that sting in the tail lol. Personally I do not feel there is any need to upset members on this wonderful poetry board. Have words with Mick. I do not know what has happened but i hope it can be resolved amicably.
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 10:14:50 AM AEST
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Scorpy, wow! I can't believe this! How irritating!
I don't even pay attention to those stupid ratings ...
Poetry is SO personal and subjective anyway. What
one person sees as beauty or art, may be seen
as "rubbish" to someone else. But still, you are right
to be annoyed. Immature is an understatement!
~Breezy
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 04:43:05 PM AEST
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| good write,me myself I couldn't careless about the point sysem,,if everyone gave me a one , I wouldn't careless,,but thats me,,still good poem ,,I hope getting it off your chest made you feel better,it always does me ,,Eddy |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 04:44:31 PM AEST
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When I first came here, my first question was, what is the points for.. I was told it was an incentive, to give you courage.. but I do not believe a vote whether it is a one or a 5 makes a poem less than. For me I enjoy reading everyones work, enjoying posting in order to help someone out, hopefully, I learn so much from others writes as well. I enjoy YPDC and I pray we can all be friends... scorp, you are a lovely person, I do hope you are ok.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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| Well now, this was rather punchy and abrupt, wasn't it? And enjoyably so, I might add. lol, I find myself just loving that last line of yours, but it was just so generally peppy and full of that kind of rage only ignorant people can produce...just awesome. YOu also pointed out some important stuff in it too, notably the last last line here (not to be mistaken with the last line, mind you :P) Thanks for the fun read! : ) |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 11:07:24 PM AEST
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Way to go Scorperific! You kick butt with this poem girl. You show 'em what ya made of.
Have I missed that much, lol, been gone 4 just a little while. I'm glad ya got it off ya chest.
You rock girl.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 11:26:33 PM AEST
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I'm not sure what this is all about but I'm sure you've got your reasons..and fortified they ARE!!
I'm a bit out of the loop...
(but always have been when it came
to inner-site politics)
I've always liked you and all your work Scorp-
and so good luck on this-
Sincerely Yours-
Billy |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 10:59:11 AM AEST
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give 'em hell scorp nice write, in your corner always
(((((scorp))))))
Ben |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by ever1der on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:17:06 PM AEST
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LOL ... I took the 1 treatment a long while back and then realized it was their way of paying attention to me..so it was great then and I learned to love the 1's..
If they stop long enough to do that, they must really like you ..;) |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:33:02 PM AEST
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek! I gave it a five just because of the fear you instill. No really, you know that's not true. You know you'd always get at the very least a 10+ from me .... if the rating system allowed but sigh, definitely a five. Yep, definitely a fiver!!! You have such a great way with words your emotions just reach out and grab me. Thank goodness I'm not a poetess or the poetess .
You're always the awesome Scorpenator. Why sweat it? A really great friend once told me to not "sweat it" so I'm just passing along those words from that great friend. :)
TIMraider
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:34:15 PM AEST
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| Oops. meant to add even though it really did inspire another great poem from you. :-) |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 03:03:13 PM AEST
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lmao scorp i think i know who your talking about and i dont blame you.
you go girl.
love and hugs |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 12:31:20 PM AEST
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Wow Scorp, for a short poem it certainly packs a big punch. I seem to recollect another poem of yours with a similar theme. I really enjoyed the write, and smiled while reading it. However, even with that softer side, you have me convinced that you can take care of yourself. :)
I love the don't mess with me theme, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:50:23 AM AEST
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CATFIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lmao. This had me laughing out loud, thanks Scorp I needed that.
On a more serious side it was extremely well written and you can be sure somebody got the message. I'm gone for a few weeks and miss out on everything, D***!!!
All my best my warrior friend
john |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by LostAmbition on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 12:50:49 PM AEST
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Low & behold!
A sarcastic poem
from the scorps i missed!
yer rough ahahaha :p
so u no who it is then?
Do tell! do tell!
Lets have a scrap!
$50 on scorps :) |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 05:58:38 PM AEST
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ha ha this is great! for some reason when you
get mad in your writes you are so very clever,
extra witty and so funny to boot! now i'm all nosey
and want to know who it was xxxxxx you off, lol
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Listen Up!
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 27th October 2020 @ 01:52:02 AM AEST
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The poetry itself is great as usual
Of course I/'/m a lifetime late here.
I look at all of these names and very few remain. I wonder why......
A question I doubt I will ever have answered.
Good for you... |
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