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Array ( [sid] => 108646 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deterrent [time] => 2005-10-28 14:06:29 [hometext] => you hold me together, pull me apart. i'm nothing better, worth nothing more, than these scars.~weepingprophet [bodytext] => trade me for a minute
for an hour
for a day
trade me for infinity
give me away

.. I belong to you
a sacred gift
and bought...
with desire

you hold the world together
pull it apart
i'm nothing better
worth nothing more
than these scars

you're appointed to call
to call me what you shall
i am..yours

you hold me
pull me
apart, together
you are everything better
than my scars
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 43 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Deterrent

Contributed by weepingprophet on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



trade me for a minute
for an hour
for a day
trade me for infinity
give me away

.. I belong to you
a sacred gift
and bought...
with desire

you hold the world together
pull it apart
i'm nothing better
worth nothing more
than these scars

you're appointed to call
to call me what you shall
i am..yours

you hold me
pull me
apart, together
you are everything better
than my scars




Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-10-28 14:06:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Deterrent (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:48:17 PM AEST
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would be a cool song interesting write

r.m.wilder


Re: Deterrent (User Rating: 1 )
by Leoricx on Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:04:53 AM AEST
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a sacred gift
and bought...
with desire


Very nice. The whole thing conveys a strong emotion. Almost bordering on dependency...

Nicely written


Re: Deterrent (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 01:49:26 PM AEST
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I found this to be quite stunning. I really enjoyed reading it. Yu should be proud of yourelf.


Re: Deterrent (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 08:01:29 PM AEST
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This is a very nice poem. I like it




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