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battered and torn like the hand which lights the candle of hope.
as we watch it burn down to nothing we know hope is fadeing away.
when the hope is gone,
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Hopes dieing

Contributed by fake_emptyness on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 09:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Theres no point in living this life,
battered and torn like the hand which lights the candle of hope.
as we watch it burn down to nothing we know hope is fadeing away.
when the hope is gone,
why should i live?

Copyright © fake_emptyness ... [ 2005-10-25 21:57:17]
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Re: Hopes dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinfullilmissmuppet on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:13:12 PM AEST
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Youy should live
I live and yea it gets horrrible lonely and desolate
I live in hope one day that i'll get what i deserve and be happy
Live for the curiousity of tomorro
and the strength you'll gain today
if that hasn't convinced u
live because ur poetry rocks
till next time doll
emz

Re: Hopes dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by Elayner27 on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:17:22 PM AEST
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This poem is really preaty, I wish it was longer.... I hope you hold on because believe me it'll get better after it gets worse.

Re: Hopes dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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I've often wondered about this myself. But then I think... What if I WASN'T on earth. I'd be missing a lot of happiness I'm feeling right now. I think it's worth living.
-Will

Re: Hopes dieing (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 01:45:17 AM AEST
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this is very thought provoking and i always ask this one myself.. this is short and to the point.. well expression .. small but the right wording.. great job

Jenni

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