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Array ( [sid] => 108316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walking Down Heaven Highway [time] => 2005-10-23 18:03:39 [hometext] => This Is between humorous and inspirational... [bodytext] => I thought I was walking down the
Highway to heaven,
I seen a light so bright and inviting
I figure I should hurry toward the
Light,
Was that the golden gate into heaven
I see?
If it was I surely missed it, it seems,
Maybe if I turned around I would find
It again
But the light seems so real, so bright
It seem to be calling me,
Is that my mother standing there?
So anxious for me to get to this light,
I’m not sure, but it did favor her
“Oh my Lord”
What happen to the light?
The light was so beautiful and bright;
It’s ok I think there is another gate
But its neither gold nor silver
What is that I see?
Fire burning so furiously till
A blaze almost scotches my hand
As I touched the latch,
Such a fiery place,not at all what
I thought,
Well better take a good look before
Entering,
Is that a serpent crawling inside?
Along side the gate
“Oh my God”
This can’t be right
Please Lord do forgive me for
My sins,
I promise I will change "Oh Lord"
I'll change,
The light has gone and I’m here
All along,
How can I live in a place without
Any flowers?
A sky so blue it would make you ask
For a drink,
Without the Lord to tell me everything
Will be ok,
Just leave my problems and he’ll work
Them out..
But guess what?
As you can see, God wasn’t ready
For me yet!
It was all just a dream he threw me back
So mother…Daddy…Billie Jack….I have
Another chance to walk down heavens
Highway
Tell my husband hope I will meet him
There;
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Walking Down Heaven Highway

Contributed by candysears on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 06:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry



I thought I was walking down the
Highway to heaven,
I seen a light so bright and inviting
I figure I should hurry toward the
Light,
Was that the golden gate into heaven
I see?
If it was I surely missed it, it seems,
Maybe if I turned around I would find
It again
But the light seems so real, so bright
It seem to be calling me,
Is that my mother standing there?
So anxious for me to get to this light,
I’m not sure, but it did favor her
“Oh my Lord”
What happen to the light?
The light was so beautiful and bright;
It’s ok I think there is another gate
But its neither gold nor silver
What is that I see?
Fire burning so furiously till
A blaze almost scotches my hand
As I touched the latch,
Such a fiery place,not at all what
I thought,
Well better take a good look before
Entering,
Is that a serpent crawling inside?
Along side the gate
“Oh my God”
This can’t be right
Please Lord do forgive me for
My sins,
I promise I will change "Oh Lord"
I'll change,
The light has gone and I’m here
All along,
How can I live in a place without
Any flowers?
A sky so blue it would make you ask
For a drink,
Without the Lord to tell me everything
Will be ok,
Just leave my problems and he’ll work
Them out..
But guess what?
As you can see, God wasn’t ready
For me yet!
It was all just a dream he threw me back
So mother…Daddy…Billie Jack….I have
Another chance to walk down heavens
Highway
Tell my husband hope I will meet him
There;




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Re: Walking Down Heaven Highway (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 11:19:41 AM AEST
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A lovely little poetic journey down your highway very nice 2 read well done . . .


Ben


Re: Walking Down Heaven Highway (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:05:39 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I found this to be more abstract, or even ambiguous, than 'humourous'. Of course, you would know best, being the author and all : )
I enjoyed reading it all the same, and I found it kind of introspective in a way...Nice job!


Scorp.


Re: Walking Down Heaven Highway (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:14:12 PM AEST
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I totally agree with Scorp on this one Candy. A great write penned by you. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
sue




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