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Array ( [sid] => 108191 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => REVEALING YOUR SOUL [time] => 2005-10-21 13:56:45 [hometext] => How do you feel about revealing your inner most thoughts to others? [bodytext] =>


REVEALING YOUR SOUL

Allowing ourselves to be heard
and pouring our souls out
Such an experience can change us
there's no doubt
Takes courage to let those around us
know our soul....
See our hearts and inner feelings
losing complete control.

Have you the courage to let
others know you intimately?
Your good deeds, and not so good
revealing your truths crudely?
Allowing another to enter your
very private space.....
'Tis very powerful indeed,
like breaking a valuable vase.

As a poet are you brave enough
to bare your soul each day?
Your downfalls, mistakes,
silly little things in every way?
Inspired, are you capable of
sharing your inner most thoughts?
Overcoming the fear you may
face with their boycotts?

When you feel safe enough to
go deep within your inner self
Abandoning your safety net,
leaving nothing on the shelf
Sorrow with tears, complimenting
your listeners also.
Showing you truly trust them
the gift of you, your ego.

Rewards for your actions
will always be very high,
Baring our truths to others
the real why.......
Sets us free from ourselves
and gives us validation
Along with peace of mind
like the innocence of children

But best of all it keeps us honest,
and secures our truths
Helping us distinguish our untruths.
anchors our integrity, our identity,
Honest souls feel worthy

My research for this article
came from the DailyOM
The poem is mine

Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
October 20, 2005



"Integrity is telling myself the truth.
And honesty is telling the truth to other people.
~Spencer Johnson~
Author

*Honest Smiles*
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REVEALING YOUR SOUL

Contributed by Lovingcritters on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:56:45 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems






REVEALING YOUR SOUL

Allowing ourselves to be heard
and pouring our souls out
Such an experience can change us
there's no doubt
Takes courage to let those around us
know our soul....
See our hearts and inner feelings
losing complete control.

Have you the courage to let
others know you intimately?
Your good deeds, and not so good
revealing your truths crudely?
Allowing another to enter your
very private space.....
'Tis very powerful indeed,
like breaking a valuable vase.

As a poet are you brave enough
to bare your soul each day?
Your downfalls, mistakes,
silly little things in every way?
Inspired, are you capable of
sharing your inner most thoughts?
Overcoming the fear you may
face with their boycotts?

When you feel safe enough to
go deep within your inner self
Abandoning your safety net,
leaving nothing on the shelf
Sorrow with tears, complimenting
your listeners also.
Showing you truly trust them
the gift of you, your ego.

Rewards for your actions
will always be very high,
Baring our truths to others
the real why.......
Sets us free from ourselves
and gives us validation
Along with peace of mind
like the innocence of children

But best of all it keeps us honest,
and secures our truths
Helping us distinguish our untruths.
anchors our integrity, our identity,
Honest souls feel worthy

My research for this article
came from the DailyOM
The poem is mine

Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
October 20, 2005



"Integrity is telling myself the truth.
And honesty is telling the truth to other people.
~Spencer Johnson~
Author

*Honest Smiles*




Copyright © Lovingcritters ... [ 2005-10-21 13:56:45]
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Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 02:42:42 PM AEST
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what a lovely poem great write
r.m.wilder


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 03:23:59 PM AEST
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So true, so very true, loved your poem, great write, makes you think.


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 03:44:49 PM AEST
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Truth is being hammered into this fantastic write.
"Who has ears - let them hear"!
Oh yes, it takes tremendous courage

"ABANDONING YOUR SAFETY NET"

and to bare the innermost thoughts. Surely, we do that all the time, a poet just cannot help it. His every line reveals him. but,

the EXTENT of the baring may truly demand a degree of bravery that is not demanded
nor asked for in any other realm and field of endeavor.
Famtastic write Consue
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Blessings
Elizabeth


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:22:27 PM AEST
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yes Conni telling the truth about ourselves on the deepest level possible. This is beautiful in its wisdom, taste and love.

huge warm hugs
Michelle


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 05:49:09 PM AEST
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I try not to think as I write-
Sometimes I have a philosophical moment, But that is rare for me...
Joe


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:00:46 AM AEST
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Good write, mom.
So true.
luv, huggs, truth,
yobrat,
emy


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 08:51:24 AM AEST
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How I love your writes. They inspire and uplift my day. This was another superb write Sue.

Love Angelxxx


Re: REVEALING YOUR SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 03:13:14 PM AEST
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Yes, this poem is exactly what needs to be written. True, we must be truthful in order to teach, pass it along, to help others.. A true self is a gift.... thank you, beautiful poem Consue...

Raquel Leah :D




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