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Array ( [sid] => 108189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Prayer with Christ part I [time] => 2005-10-21 13:03:47 [hometext] => True Story [bodytext] => "What a Christian you are" she laughed
On that cold and lonely night
Denial overwhelmed my thoughts
Until I realized she was right

My heart was perverted and so was my soul
There's no way I deserve His love
So I fell on my knees, lifted up my hands
And said, "send Your anointing from above."

At that moment I felt relieved
I knew God had heard my prayer
I continued to say, "forgive me O Lord
For I know that you are there"

I broke down and apologized
Cause I know that I've done wrong
Christ said to me "Wipe your tears,
stand up, and now be strong"

He also said (as I felt ashamed)
"I hung on that cross for you
And anytime your skies turn gray
I'll turn them back to blue"

Amazed by His forgiving response, I asked
"Lord why are you so good to me?"
With a gentle voice, He simply replied
You were blind and now you see

By: Davanan Jr. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 11 [informant] => sughy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Prayer with Christ part I

Contributed by sughy on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

"What a Christian you are" she laughed
On that cold and lonely night
Denial overwhelmed my thoughts
Until I realized she was right

My heart was perverted and so was my soul
There's no way I deserve His love
So I fell on my knees, lifted up my hands
And said, "send Your anointing from above."

At that moment I felt relieved
I knew God had heard my prayer
I continued to say, "forgive me O Lord
For I know that you are there"

I broke down and apologized
Cause I know that I've done wrong
Christ said to me "Wipe your tears,
stand up, and now be strong"

He also said (as I felt ashamed)
"I hung on that cross for you
And anytime your skies turn gray
I'll turn them back to blue"

Amazed by His forgiving response, I asked
"Lord why are you so good to me?"
With a gentle voice, He simply replied
You were blind and now you see

By: Davanan Jr.

Copyright © sughy ... [ 2005-10-21 13:03:47]
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Re: Prayer with Christ part I (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 10:29:03 PM AEST
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excellent last stanza. true stories often are the best kind, so your next parts should just strengthen this piece.

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