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Array ( [sid] => 108160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pot or not we still are human [time] => 2005-10-20 22:33:53 [hometext] => equal rights for equal fights [bodytext] => rules to follow rules to obey why doesn't the goverment just go away
just last week a poor man died asking kids where to get high
they beat him up and stabbed him the other day
for something so small he didn't need to die

another man unable to travel because of a joint he didn't swallow
they threw him in prison took away his rights in most people's eyes that is not right
he sits now at his kwik e mart job regreting his life living so hollow
stuck in this job for the rest of his life wishing he put up a fight

does this make sense is pot such a sin to take the freedom of ordinary men
until the day that men have rights i will never give up the fight [comments] => 3 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lostrelic [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

pot or not we still are human

Contributed by lostrelic on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 10:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

rules to follow rules to obey why doesn't the goverment just go away
just last week a poor man died asking kids where to get high
they beat him up and stabbed him the other day
for something so small he didn't need to die

another man unable to travel because of a joint he didn't swallow
they threw him in prison took away his rights in most people's eyes that is not right
he sits now at his kwik e mart job regreting his life living so hollow
stuck in this job for the rest of his life wishing he put up a fight

does this make sense is pot such a sin to take the freedom of ordinary men
until the day that men have rights i will never give up the fight

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2005-10-20 22:33:53]
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Re: pot or not we still are human (User Rating: 1 )
by coolbreeze17 on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 10:52:08 PM AEST
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totally agree..nice write

Re: pot or not we still are human (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 09:54:38 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Pot's been around much longer than the ones making the rules.
Good work.
luv, huggs, freedom,
emy

Re: pot or not we still are human (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:02:01 PM AEST
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Thee erbal essence is a must
nice write

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