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One Life
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:43:57 PM in AEST
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One life that I am given One life Im condemned to live in One life
How long Must I go on How long Must I belong To this one life
Empty and eternal I am marked infernal One life away from death And one day to pass the test Lay me to rest
One life Im giving One life Condemn me to live it Live in this filth This decay Live in this life I cant trade it away
I cant trade it away
One life Despise What I cant divide Scrape the truth from the lies
How long Must I belong To this life Lay me to rest I cant trade it away
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2005-10-19 18:43:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: One Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 06:48:29 PM AEST (User
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brutally written and with some very fine lines to
emphasize it as well. Lines like " Scrape the
truth from the lies..." that's graphic and telling.
Your style is distinct and it's great to read...
Keep it up ! |
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Re: One Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 11:10:22 PM AEST (User
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| Excellent, the feeling is mutual. Every sentence moved me. Very articulate and well said. |
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