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As merry as the sea
Careful not to rock the boat
Else i'll lose my sanity

Off the clouds i skip my stones
Like a son so free
To earth i send my dirty bones
This note attached to me

"Love you Sunday!! Love you all!!!
"Miss you Monday!! Miss you all!!!"

I'm sinking on a ship of gold
My breath is bubble blue
I told myself i'd never old
So let this captian through

Set the sky on fire please
I need the heat to feel
Half my ashes in the breeze
The rest for God to steal.

dw

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Dirty Bones

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 02:50:47 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession

Somewhere in the sun i float
As merry as the sea
Careful not to rock the boat
Else i'll lose my sanity

Off the clouds i skip my stones
Like a son so free
To earth i send my dirty bones
This note attached to me

"Love you Sunday!! Love you all!!!
"Miss you Monday!! Miss you all!!!"

I'm sinking on a ship of gold
My breath is bubble blue
I told myself i'd never old
So let this captian through

Set the sky on fire please
I need the heat to feel
Half my ashes in the breeze
The rest for God to steal.

dw

Copyright © In_a_While ... [ 2005-10-19 14:50:47]
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Re: Dirty Bones (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 07:03:13 PM AEST
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I am still analyzing these peice i'll get back to you when i have some insight. Just wanted to say that my initial response was awe, this is beautiful and i think it will be more so when i scrutinize the intricacy of it.

~lay me to rest, i can't trade it away~weepingprophet

Re: Dirty Bones (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:52:04 PM AEST
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Ummm....yeah! I'm liking this Dwayne...alot...Everything is razor sharp in this piece...The feeling, the flow, the way you express your bitterness, indifference, and sadness...all rolled into one. I'm glad I didn't miss this read. You always come up with something new, and it's refreshing to say the least.

Scorp.

Re: Dirty Bones (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:42:06 AM AEST
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amazing write, well done

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