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I always thought it would last
How can my life go on
If I know you are gone
I think about you day and night
And wish you could hold me tight
I thought you were the one for me
But that's not the way you want it to be
Why cant we be the way we were
That's the way I prefer
Am I being to kind
Or am I just blind
Your breaking my heart
As we fall apart
Should I leave you alone
Should I not phone
Can you not see
What your doing to me
All you do is supply
The tears that I cry
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Falling Apart

Contributed by Cici on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

All these days that have passed
I always thought it would last
How can my life go on
If I know you are gone
I think about you day and night
And wish you could hold me tight
I thought you were the one for me
But that's not the way you want it to be
Why cant we be the way we were
That's the way I prefer
Am I being to kind
Or am I just blind
Your breaking my heart
As we fall apart
Should I leave you alone
Should I not phone
Can you not see
What your doing to me
All you do is supply
The tears that I cry

Copyright © Cici ... [ 2003-01-20 01:00:00]
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Re: Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 03:05:20 AM AEST
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Awww Cici this is so sad......i am so sorry your going through this rough time right now in your life, try and keep your chin up and know that things will get better....this is a sad but beautiful write.....i enjoyed this one girl....keep writing you write beautifully...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 01:53:03 PM AEST
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Even though I don't know you Cici, I hope you will get better. Try to keep a smile on your face, I know it will get better for you. *S* Cynthia

Re: Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 11:22:27 AM AEST
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Ci ci, I was a young man once and I broke a few hearts like yours. I wasn't worth crying over, I wasn't what they thought I was.
Oh yes I thought I loved them for a little while but untill you get to a certain stage, a certain frame of mind, your pals one by one get married, disappear and you get the right "mind set" you are no use to any girl.
Good write makes me feel very uncomfortable

Re: Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 05:43:17 PM AEST
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HI CICI,
THIS IS JUST BEAUTIFUL,AM SORRY HE MAKES YOU CRY,
BUT ONE DAY THOSE TEARS WILL ALL BE GONE.WHEN TRUE LOVE ARRIVE.
RICHARD CAMPBELL.

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