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Array ( [sid] => 107648 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => wal-mart world [time] => 2005-10-13 10:32:08 [hometext] => written after an unpleasant wal-mart trip.....I am not the shopper type [bodytext] => too many faces
too many to breathe
dominos fall down
around my knees
ogling with faces
strained
stained
with paint and tears
hushed tones of
spoken fears
Buying into the man
wish I wasn't here
I
need
clear
view
ahead
no voices violating
me...

among the wal-mart dead

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wal-mart world

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:32:08 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

too many faces
too many to breathe
dominos fall down
around my knees
ogling with faces
strained
stained
with paint and tears
hushed tones of
spoken fears
Buying into the man
wish I wasn't here
I
need
clear
view
ahead
no voices violating
me...

among the wal-mart dead

Laura Horner 9-05

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2005-10-13 10:32:08]
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Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:56:16 AM AEST
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I have a friend who say the same thing. He has this saying:

"I have to wear aluminum fiol over my head when ever I go into a store like that so that people don't use the bright lights to bore into my brain".

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:11:13 AM AEST
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Ugh, thats why i never go to Walmart. It is so overly populated that sometimes its hard to breath anymore.

Lets ban Walmart, heheheehe.

Jane~

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:58:51 AM AEST
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lol i gotta say beautiful poem and yet i agree i never liked wal mart i never will not to mention all the people it put out of work and traditions it destroyed, right on sister laura
and peace 2u .

Ben

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:01:59 PM AEST
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lol! i love this...and i hate wal mart!!! this was awsome!!! lol

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:30:50 PM AEST
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You know, I was considering writing something about Wal-Mart the other day, you beat me to it! :P I'm glad though, it was a good read, and good write.

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:53:12 PM AEST
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I CAN RELATE, LOL.

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:47:23 AM AEST
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Hi Laura,

Very creative style, and a fun poem to read. Whenever I go into Wal-Mart, or some such store, I feel like i'm in a maze, and I may not find my way out. I may have to spend hundreds of dollars before they will let me out of the store! :)

Peace be with you, my friend

Will

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 10:29:57 PM AEST
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I know the feeling all too well. It is the ecstasy of perfect recognition.

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 04:04:02 PM AEST
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I Love Wal Mart

Re: wal-mart world (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:25:40 AM AEST
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Laughing at Trisha for loving walmart.heheh
very creative writing.

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