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Array ( [sid] => 107539 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled 8 [time] => 2005-10-11 21:18:30 [hometext] => what the he*l is left? [bodytext] => hollow and recognize
muffled tears, restrained cries
who am i on the inside
what am i on the inside

divide what i say
from what i do
am i anything
worth anything to you?

a tender touch and revelation
keep the trust on elevation
until, lights out

incomplete and empty

until.....

divide what i say
from what i do
am i anything
worth anything to you

sickness unfolding in the midst
in the night
sickness unfolding
the tongue of the truth i bite
for our sworn love
elevating trust
revelation

i am nothing
i am worth nothing
to you

until....

i undress to pass the test
i'm good, you say
reassure
i'm the best

divide what you say
from what you do
who am i
why do i give me to you?

reassure, reaffirm
then realize
i am nothing
until....

the scrape and tear
the hold of the blade
the flesh and the care
of my own disdain
good-bye to you
good-bye
divide what i say
from what i do
i am everything
i am nothing
i am anything
but you

I AM
I AM NOTHING
NOTHING
I AM NOTHING

until...... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 43 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

untitled 8

Contributed by weepingprophet on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

hollow and recognize
muffled tears, restrained cries
who am i on the inside
what am i on the inside

divide what i say
from what i do
am i anything
worth anything to you?

a tender touch and revelation
keep the trust on elevation
until, lights out

incomplete and empty

until.....

divide what i say
from what i do
am i anything
worth anything to you

sickness unfolding in the midst
in the night
sickness unfolding
the tongue of the truth i bite
for our sworn love
elevating trust
revelation

i am nothing
i am worth nothing
to you

until....

i undress to pass the test
i'm good, you say
reassure
i'm the best

divide what you say
from what you do
who am i
why do i give me to you?

reassure, reaffirm
then realize
i am nothing
until....

the scrape and tear
the hold of the blade
the flesh and the care
of my own disdain
good-bye to you
good-bye
divide what i say
from what i do
i am everything
i am nothing
i am anything
but you

I AM
I AM NOTHING
NOTHING
I AM NOTHING

until......

Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-10-11 21:18:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: untitled 8 (User Rating: 1 )
by xPixiexDustx on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:25:57 PM AEST
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I love the feeling expressed here. It flows great, almost sounds like a song to me. Very good write, I loved it. =)

Re: untitled 8 (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:07:59 PM AEST
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Wow! I hope the person you wrote this to gets the point. It sounds like it was written to someone who takes you for granted and uses you for his / her own gain.

Re: untitled 8 (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:11:35 AM AEST
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AMAZING

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