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Array ( [sid] => 107350 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => People [time] => 2005-10-08 22:13:12 [hometext] => I couldnt really put this poem in a topic properly i hope i chose the right one, its the first poem i submit. [bodytext] => People fade and people change
People even forget about that range
Even though you think all this is strange
It has nothing to do with all my rage
People will never understand where their place
People would never forget about that chase
And then they finally learn how to embrace
People change for the good
People change for the bad
I personally think it’s all just sad
People hurt
People lie
People even make others cry
You don’t have to believe a word I say
But for now this is all just on delay
People sit down at night and start to prey
They just don’t know life is just one long bad day
People deserve to have all that love
Even though it’s just from that one person high above
People deserve to have that one last chance
Even though it’s just a glance
But some people don’t even deserve that glance
Not even that small, tiny chance
People are brave
Some crave
And some save
Some people don’t care
They don’t even know that word “fare”
But what can we do its all just there
I know it’s so hard to even bare
That’s why I’ll give you some advice
Some people need to be forgotten
It will be hard
It will seem dark
Think that they left you without a spark
There’s nothing more that can be done
Even though at the beginning it seemed like fun
But it ends up seeming like they fired a gun
I just have to say it now
I’m done. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 350 [topic] => 65 [informant] => zalzool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
People

Contributed by zalzool on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:13:12 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



People fade and people change
People even forget about that range
Even though you think all this is strange
It has nothing to do with all my rage
People will never understand where their place
People would never forget about that chase
And then they finally learn how to embrace
People change for the good
People change for the bad
I personally think it’s all just sad
People hurt
People lie
People even make others cry
You don’t have to believe a word I say
But for now this is all just on delay
People sit down at night and start to prey
They just don’t know life is just one long bad day
People deserve to have all that love
Even though it’s just from that one person high above
People deserve to have that one last chance
Even though it’s just a glance
But some people don’t even deserve that glance
Not even that small, tiny chance
People are brave
Some crave
And some save
Some people don’t care
They don’t even know that word “fare”
But what can we do its all just there
I know it’s so hard to even bare
That’s why I’ll give you some advice
Some people need to be forgotten
It will be hard
It will seem dark
Think that they left you without a spark
There’s nothing more that can be done
Even though at the beginning it seemed like fun
But it ends up seeming like they fired a gun
I just have to say it now
I’m done.




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Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:18:11 PM AEST
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Very nice job, it flowed greatly...
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Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:09:40 AM AEST
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Nice post for your first one, with good ideas and everything. A couple of spelling errors though, if anything you might want to take advantage of the spell checking that the moderators do upon request, just another perk of ypdc : )

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Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:15:11 AM AEST
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People write, but they don't know how to spell, people slant ryhme, but they don't do it very well. :)


Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:28:26 PM AEST
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I definitely like the thought process that led to this write. There's some truths in your words for sure. I did notice a couple spelling errors that you may have overlooked. 'Prey'---prey, 'Fare'---fair. I (at least think) you meant the latter on both counts. My apologies if I'm wrong. Also, I think you maybe went a little too extra with the rhymes. I personally tend to find rhyming 3 or more lines together (in a row), makes it appear 'forced'.At the very least, when it's done repeatedly throughout a poem. I think you're on the right track though, and if you keep at it, you'll develop a more solid rhyme scheme.
I hope you find this helpful.
Welcome to YPDC : )


Scorp.


Re: People (User Rating: 1 )
by Without_Hope on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 02:26:33 AM AEST
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I'm not sure I agree with your poem, but I like the structure too it, and the words are verry well written.




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