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Array ( [sid] => 107273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In You [time] => 2005-10-07 15:04:26 [hometext] => ~I remain in you...........and waiting~ [bodytext] => Collapse
cold hard truth
where are you?

locked up, the muse
chest aching
heart breaking
all i have ever been

locked up, in you
the used
and the cold hard truth is
where are you?

relapse into belief
you've taken the best of me
and the truth remains
i'll be the same
the same tragic mess
the same hollow madness

locked up
abused
and the cold hard truth
is always
slapping, relapsing into
you and where
but here

i am the same
self-inflicted pain
i've always been
always will
remain
in you

and waiting [comments] => 5 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 55 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
In You

Contributed by weepingprophet on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:04:26 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Collapse
cold hard truth
where are you?

locked up, the muse
chest aching
heart breaking
all i have ever been

locked up, in you
the used
and the cold hard truth is
where are you?

relapse into belief
you've taken the best of me
and the truth remains
i'll be the same
the same tragic mess
the same hollow madness

locked up
abused
and the cold hard truth
is always
slapping, relapsing into
you and where
but here

i am the same
self-inflicted pain
i've always been
always will
remain
in you

and waiting




Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-10-07 15:04:26]
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Re: In You (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:33:54 PM AEST
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very edgy and extremely well written. I especially like
the last stanza... but the entire piece was great!

keep up the cold hard truth.


Re: In You (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:55:05 PM AEST
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nice write with a great flow
r.m.wilder


Re: In You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:26:18 PM AEST
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Wow. A powerful write. I liked this very much! Your words
evoke strong emotions. Looking forward to more....

~Breezy


Re: In You (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:09:18 AM AEST
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incredible write, keep up the great work


Re: In You (User Rating: 1 )
by Sicone on Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:41:04 PM AEST
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Wow...Its is really nice, seriously.




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