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Array ( [sid] => 107040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => she says [time] => 2005-10-03 21:45:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She says, her friends in her right arm,
Her soft voice, is like music with harm.
She knows I’m caged for her picture,
But if replacement is the feature.
Then why should I care?

Clock ticks away,
But you know she’s going to make him wait.

Taking off sometime to pick a prize, but you know its just bait.
She slept on my sentimental side, with sheets of deep lies,
She doesn’t know that I dropped life with her red dice.
She makes me pray for an email,
But you can set me sail, because I like to inhale.

Clock ticks away,
but you know she’s going to make him wait.

All the love that she gave was in the poison that ate,
I have worked on this for years & you think it’s to late.
If you live together then troubles gone then its ok,
I’ll bring you when my life set sail off to die,
Assuming that you’ll sleep with him tonight.

Its like reading words in Sanskrit,
On my arms that flow with pride,

You could bring those letters I write,
This could be the right night.

Its like reading words in Sanskrit,

You fled away to meet,
To fill in lonely nights that brought me down,
You fled away to meet,
She sails with bait for a stormy night that brings no love & life.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Ranchan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

she says

Contributed by Ranchan on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:45:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

She says, her friends in her right arm,
Her soft voice, is like music with harm.
She knows I’m caged for her picture,
But if replacement is the feature.
Then why should I care?

Clock ticks away,
But you know she’s going to make him wait.

Taking off sometime to pick a prize, but you know its just bait.
She slept on my sentimental side, with sheets of deep lies,
She doesn’t know that I dropped life with her red dice.
She makes me pray for an email,
But you can set me sail, because I like to inhale.

Clock ticks away,
but you know she’s going to make him wait.

All the love that she gave was in the poison that ate,
I have worked on this for years & you think it’s to late.
If you live together then troubles gone then its ok,
I’ll bring you when my life set sail off to die,
Assuming that you’ll sleep with him tonight.

Its like reading words in Sanskrit,
On my arms that flow with pride,

You could bring those letters I write,
This could be the right night.

Its like reading words in Sanskrit,

You fled away to meet,
To fill in lonely nights that brought me down,
You fled away to meet,
She sails with bait for a stormy night that brings no love & life.

Copyright Â© Ranchan ... [ 2005-10-03 21:45:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: she says (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:44:07 PM AEST
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Great job, some lines are really good.

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