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Array ( [sid] => 106968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blood drips down [time] => 2005-10-03 00:25:54 [hometext] => i really dont have anything to say up here... just that i dont do this anymore, all-tho i did. and all this is true. my dad did leave, and i really dont have a mother...not really [bodytext] => i dry my tears with
the blood stained rag
thinking over and over again
money... all this over money
daddy, u left the country for what...
money.
i never had a father, and when i do
u leave me... for money
did it even occur to you
that i might want a dad?
i think this as the blood drips down my wrist
i glance at the knife i had
laughing at how all i had to do
was make one "slip"
of my hand
and it would be all over
no father, no mother, not even a step-mom or half brother anymore
dad, u took my step-mom and brother,
u pushed mommy away
u left me with my grandparents
daddy......... maybe you can think about that while you watch the blood drip down your daugher's wrists [comments] => 6 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 72 [informant] => sweetestsin101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

blood drips down

Contributed by sweetestsin101 on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:25:54 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

i dry my tears with
the blood stained rag
thinking over and over again
money... all this over money
daddy, u left the country for what...
money.
i never had a father, and when i do
u leave me... for money
did it even occur to you
that i might want a dad?
i think this as the blood drips down my wrist
i glance at the knife i had
laughing at how all i had to do
was make one "slip"
of my hand
and it would be all over
no father, no mother, not even a step-mom or half brother anymore
dad, u took my step-mom and brother,
u pushed mommy away
u left me with my grandparents
daddy......... maybe you can think about that while you watch the blood drip down your daugher's wrists

Copyright © sweetestsin101 ... [ 2005-10-03 00:25:54]
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Re: blood drips down (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetestsin101 on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:41:01 AM AEST
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lemme know if it is good. my aol sn is swtstsn9 if ppl wanna talk. i wanna work more on gettin them 2 make sence. lemme kno how im doin please

Re: blood drips down (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:21:37 AM AEST
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poetry doesnt have to make sense, this is filled with emotion, well done

Re: blood drips down (User Rating: 1 )
by ArmyBrat on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:44:46 PM AEST
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very awesome alot of emotions show ur true feelings. good job i like ur poems.

Re: blood drips down (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:56:04 PM AEST
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so deep and sad.

Re: blood drips down (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:33:10 PM AEST
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A sad, deep and emotional write.
I'm so sorry for all the pain and suffering you've been through. May God guide ur fragile heart. Keep penning down ur emotions. A sad, but well written poem.
*hugs*
Sue

Re: blood drips down (User Rating: 1 )
by Kazzy1231 on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 10:27:23 AM AEST
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Great write!

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