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depleat as the guts gush from the hollow
crevace in my face. The very substance
that gives me life, forces me to yurn the
end of existance. And as the blood
vessels burst around my hazel eyes,
the forced tears evoke my satisfaction
to purge the never-ending torment of
naturally stored energy. But within that
satisfaction, the pain manifests. The
hurt too much to withstand, I feel
my life wilting with every moment. Being
concious influences my tendancy to
destroy my state of composure, so I must
indulge in that which resides over my
concious thought. Pills, the solid
solution to my manic insanity, is my
only escape from the mind-controlling
self pity I fear I will posses for the entirety
of eternity.
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A Double Addiction of Torment

Contributed by JonCart3r on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:14:39 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

It's overwhelming, the way I feel my life
depleat as the guts gush from the hollow
crevace in my face. The very substance
that gives me life, forces me to yurn the
end of existance. And as the blood
vessels burst around my hazel eyes,
the forced tears evoke my satisfaction
to purge the never-ending torment of
naturally stored energy. But within that
satisfaction, the pain manifests. The
hurt too much to withstand, I feel
my life wilting with every moment. Being
concious influences my tendancy to
destroy my state of composure, so I must
indulge in that which resides over my
concious thought. Pills, the solid
solution to my manic insanity, is my
only escape from the mind-controlling
self pity I fear I will posses for the entirety
of eternity.

Copyright © JonCart3r ... [ 2005-10-02 20:14:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A Double Addiction of Torment (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:49:30 PM AEST
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nicely written.
cheers,
-glass

Re: A Double Addiction of Torment (User Rating: 1 )
by kerrah681 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:54:41 PM AEST
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Absolutley wonderful,the poem I posted today and as always actually is about inside the depths of your minds eye, I relate and insanely Know what your expressing....EXCELLENT work, I thank you for sharing this poem with the world...

Re: A Double Addiction of Torment (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:10:12 PM AEST
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This is really well written

I know how you feel and you are not alone. The question is will you use the opportunities offered to you? I ask this question to myself as well. Don't give up!

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