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Helpless and bare
Dying on the inside
But no one seems to care

I reach my hand out
Waiting for a chance
From anyone out there
But they don’t even glance

I really need some help now
For this life that I’m in
Is pretty pathetic
And there's no way I can win

'Cause I’m standing on the edge no
Giving up on dear life
'Cause this life has betrayed me
And left me with nothing but a knife

And this knife is what I’ll use
To get rid of my pain
To wash away my sorrow
With no more to obtain
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Lost

Contributed by misunderstood_gurl on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm lost and lonely
Helpless and bare
Dying on the inside
But no one seems to care

I reach my hand out
Waiting for a chance
From anyone out there
But they don’t even glance

I really need some help now
For this life that I’m in
Is pretty pathetic
And there's no way I can win

'Cause I’m standing on the edge no
Giving up on dear life
'Cause this life has betrayed me
And left me with nothing but a knife

And this knife is what I’ll use
To get rid of my pain
To wash away my sorrow
With no more to obtain

Copyright Â© misunderstood_gurl ... [ 2005-09-30 20:14:52]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:59:41 PM AEST
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No!!! no use the knife!! talk to me remember, i'm still here!! don't hurt yourself, please.

but the poem is great! i loved it, as i do all of your writes!! and yet again, it feels like you are writing from my heart. just, let's stay together and help each other through the lives we are left with. just take care of yourself for me and keep up the great work!

~sprints

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 11:22:01 PM AEST
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this is a very good poem, i have felt like that before. if you need anyone to talk to pm me anytime.

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:12:18 PM AEST
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great one, im a loner too, and i sometimes do feel the same ...

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:37:55 AM AEST
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thankies for all the comments! and i know sprints...i wont hurt myself its just how i feel sometimes. its not like i can help it...or maybe i can.

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