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With love to my dear husband Stephen on the day he passed - into heaven.







His hands were strong - they wore a golden band
With pride - I loved to look at his right hand!
It shielded me from injury and harm,
His smile was full of playfulness and charm.
O vigorous and so industrious hands,
That wrought sheer miracles with odds and ends
And wielded tools and implements with skill,-
Ingenious, creative, deft, - until-
Grave illness struck my darling to the core
And gone were all the happy days of yore,
Of kicking pedals tandem on a bike
And walking on the beach, or take a hike,

The strong tanned hands now looked so white and pale,
diaphanous, transparent, thin and frail,
Don’t touch sheer hands so etherialized,
“Noli me tangere” had said the Christ
To Magdalen who clutched with eagerness
At hands familiar, but so diaphanous.
But I did strain with all my might to hear
The utterances of my cavalier
To take in every gesture, every word,-
He spoke with shortened breath now, but I heard:



I heard a Rider galloping a-field
In furious gallop and I shuddered, chilled.
My heart skipped beats with anguish, dread and fear,
The rider stopped his course and now drew near
He had a sharpened scythe and it was clear
He targeted my knight. my cavalier,
And stood between the sick bed and my seat
And now began to graze my Stephen’s feet.

I interjected myself - “Stop! be gone!
Away dark rider, leave my Love alone!
The only true love that I ever had,
Do not come near,- do not approach his bed!”
I pleaded desperately, begged and cried,
Apocalyptic Rider! - spare my knight
Have merci! pity! - for I need him so!
But he retorted: “It is time - let go!”
“Let go! let go!, - Ah letting go is sweet!
Give up! submit! to what‘s on high decreed.!”

O ethereal strange translucency
Of my love’s face and hands, it seemed that he
Was seeking, groping, tapping ’long the sheet
With his frail hands a stronger hand to meet
than mine whose fingers slipped so helplessly
T’wixt tears and moans beads of the rosary.

The rider swung the scythe and dealt the blow,
and peace supreme shone from my true love’s brow;
A groan, a prayer as I held him tight
In vain, my Love had gone into the Light.



In memory of my husband Stephen Dandy +On a most beautiful September 30th

MY KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR
His name is Stephen, the most caring, faithful, brave and loyal husband. May he rest in the arms of our loving Father in heaven!.

© Elizabeth Dandy














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I Heard a Rider Galloping

Contributed by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 06:28:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief




With love to my dear husband Stephen on the day he passed - into heaven.







His hands were strong - they wore a golden band
With pride - I loved to look at his right hand!
It shielded me from injury and harm,
His smile was full of playfulness and charm.
O vigorous and so industrious hands,
That wrought sheer miracles with odds and ends
And wielded tools and implements with skill,-
Ingenious, creative, deft, - until-
Grave illness struck my darling to the core
And gone were all the happy days of yore,
Of kicking pedals tandem on a bike
And walking on the beach, or take a hike,

The strong tanned hands now looked so white and pale,
diaphanous, transparent, thin and frail,
Don’t touch sheer hands so etherialized,
“Noli me tangere” had said the Christ
To Magdalen who clutched with eagerness
At hands familiar, but so diaphanous.
But I did strain with all my might to hear
The utterances of my cavalier
To take in every gesture, every word,-
He spoke with shortened breath now, but I heard:



I heard a Rider galloping a-field
In furious gallop and I shuddered, chilled.
My heart skipped beats with anguish, dread and fear,
The rider stopped his course and now drew near
He had a sharpened scythe and it was clear
He targeted my knight. my cavalier,
And stood between the sick bed and my seat
And now began to graze my Stephen’s feet.

I interjected myself - “Stop! be gone!
Away dark rider, leave my Love alone!
The only true love that I ever had,
Do not come near,- do not approach his bed!”
I pleaded desperately, begged and cried,
Apocalyptic Rider! - spare my knight
Have merci! pity! - for I need him so!
But he retorted: “It is time - let go!”
“Let go! let go!, - Ah letting go is sweet!
Give up! submit! to what‘s on high decreed.!”

O ethereal strange translucency
Of my love’s face and hands, it seemed that he
Was seeking, groping, tapping ’long the sheet
With his frail hands a stronger hand to meet
than mine whose fingers slipped so helplessly
T’wixt tears and moans beads of the rosary.

The rider swung the scythe and dealt the blow,
and peace supreme shone from my true love’s brow;
A groan, a prayer as I held him tight
In vain, my Love had gone into the Light.



In memory of my husband Stephen Dandy +On a most beautiful September 30th

MY KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR
His name is Stephen, the most caring, faithful, brave and loyal husband. May he rest in the arms of our loving Father in heaven!.

© Elizabeth Dandy


















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Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:14:15 PM AEST
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Wow. I am sure we all have felt the grief of a loved one. If your husband could read it he would be proud. My condolences to you and your family.
liz


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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This comment is brought forward from my last year's posting.

Re: A Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1)
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, October 31 2004 @ 12:16:53 CST
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O M G Elizabeth,this was so sad,I felt your pain in this poem,I am so very sorry to hear of your husbands death,I'm speachless!
Your poetry tribute to him was beautifully done!
Christina


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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Re: A Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1)
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, October 31 2004 @ 20:33:06 CST
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Elizabeth, I'm so sorry for your loss.... This is an excellent write..Keep his memory alive in your heart.... he will always be with you...
Hugs,
Jenni

THE ABOVE COMMENT IS BEING BROUGHT FORWARD FROM LAST YEAR'S POSTING.


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 02:09:17 AM AEST
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My Dearest Elizabeth:

A most beautiful write ever...

I just love reading your poetry, means so much to me, helps to heal my old wounds to the loss of my first husband, knowing and feeling your love as you write your September poetry.

You explain in words true love at its best, takes the threat away from everyday living, your words so beautifully chosen, written into a masterpiece, giving life a concern to each of us as we read, you produce so much of it as you tell your story.

You have such a walk of freedom about you, I don't mind walking with you at all, its peaceful.

You write the sounds of beauty as you know what it sounds like when the wind comes over the ocean,
where you can meet up with heaven, so many feelings are released in the sheer joy of reading.

You share an abundance of energy and is given to us.

There is a lot of healing shown in your writes, gives us rest, in fearing not the difficulties of our everyday life.

I love the glamour if you will, how you share each word carefully chosen to bring that beauty out from pen to mind.

Sharing how your loved his hands, what they were, and how they were so loving, touches my heart.

I love your spirit, you shine, and how could anyone not accept your loving reality.

Thank you for sharing his picture, and I touched it, and I pray hard.. in heaven he looks down at you, he is loving you, for keeping and sharing his life with us. Bless you dear lady. You are in the Light with him. I know how hard it is to let go, you were courageous, he is in a far better place, and soon you will be there with him, to hold forever and ever.

Its very hard for me to write through these tears, as I am.

I look forward to reading more of your writes, I thank you so much, I love you, huggies,

Your friend,

Raquel Leah :D













Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:14:19 PM AEST
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A fitting tribute to someone who obviously meant the entire world to you.
In time the pain of loss always gets a little easier to bear, though it is never diminished with the passing of days
Sorry for your loss

Steve


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:47:28 PM AEST
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Very sad, my dear sweet friend but beautifully written.
I'm sure he smiles down on u each time u write in honer and remembrance to him.
luv, big huggs,
emy


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:12:17 PM AEST
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Now that's love.
Wow!
Stitch 8)


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:37:45 AM AEST
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I remember...wow another year gone already!
This is such a wonderful tribute to a good looking hubby and friend called Stephen, Elizabeth....I hope your memories of him will last your life time...
coni


Re: I Heard a Rider Galloping (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:14:11 PM AEST
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This is a good dedication poem for your husband. I like the way you told it as a battle.




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