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Array ( [sid] => 106753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Screams [time] => 2005-09-29 16:07:48 [hometext] => I wrote this about someone who wanted me to talk to him about my issues, yet everytime I tried he would ignore my feelings and just start talking about himself. Then he would ask me why I wouldn't let him help me. [bodytext] => I'm screaming, I'm crying, I'm dying
Why aren't you here?
I'm screaming, I'm crying, I'm dying
Why aren't you near ?

Can't you hear me ?
Or do you just not care?
Why can't you see ?
I just want you to be there.

The pain inside
You refuse to see
The tears I've cried
Can't set me free

These feelings you ignore
Are building up inside
Can't take much more
Wish I could run and hide

Dark clouds crowd my mind
Can't take it anymore
Time to unwind
With wings I must sore

Sitting in my shrine
Razor blade in hand
Begin to draw the line
I wish you could understand

Blood beings to flow
I'll close my eyes.
Feelings I tried to show
Instead you refused to hear my cries

Now its too late
Too bad you'll never know
Maybe this was my fate
Sent the pain below

No longer screaming, no longer crying.
I found the solution..
The answer was dying.
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Silent Screams

Contributed by xPixiexDustx on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 04:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I'm screaming, I'm crying, I'm dying
Why aren't you here?
I'm screaming, I'm crying, I'm dying
Why aren't you near ?

Can't you hear me ?
Or do you just not care?
Why can't you see ?
I just want you to be there.

The pain inside
You refuse to see
The tears I've cried
Can't set me free

These feelings you ignore
Are building up inside
Can't take much more
Wish I could run and hide

Dark clouds crowd my mind
Can't take it anymore
Time to unwind
With wings I must sore

Sitting in my shrine
Razor blade in hand
Begin to draw the line
I wish you could understand

Blood beings to flow
I'll close my eyes.
Feelings I tried to show
Instead you refused to hear my cries

Now its too late
Too bad you'll never know
Maybe this was my fate
Sent the pain below

No longer screaming, no longer crying.
I found the solution..
The answer was dying.




Copyright © xPixiexDustx ... [ 2005-09-29 16:07:48]
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Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 04:51:29 PM AEST
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such a sad poem maybe your better off without this him he cant even be here for you at this terrible time and if you ever need to talk about your feeling or problems you can trust me not to change the subject to myself lol you deserve to have a life and be happy dont waste it away like some people. jope things work out all my hope
Jenni
xxx


Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:17:30 PM AEST
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who could not listen to you? ...
by how beautifully, clearly and passionately u do speak ...

the one who is not worthy of you!

chrash out with someone who will be there for you

a powerful wrtie


¸·:·´Arsenic




Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarletrayne on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:33:19 PM AEST
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I can relate, very emotional write, I bet it feels better to get it out. I know it won't solve it, but still. There are a lot of people out there like that, some people can't handle what they've brought themselves into. Find someone you can really help you, someone who's been through it too, and it'll be easier, people who haven't can only listen which is great, but they can also get overwhelmed because they don't understand. Great write.


Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:39:10 PM AEST
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i really need to correct my terrible spelling ...

thats to *crash* out of the dark place youre in
to a brighter place ...

peace be you


*.¸¸.·arsenic




Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:40:10 AM AEST
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amazing poem, well done


Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by xPixiexDustx on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 04:40:48 PM AEST
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Thanks for all the support =) I've already gotten rid of the "he" I was talking about lol. Self-absorbed people really suck.. so I've learned.


Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:52:41 PM AEST
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beautiful. the word that comes to mind. you and i are so alike, no one to understand. just refrain from silence, for words are more precious. hugs 2 u. i loved it.

Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.

~Ash


Re: Silent Screams (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:59:37 PM AEST
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Wow that was amazing. I could feel the strong emotions. Great write!




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