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Array ( [sid] => 106607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => crazy house [time] => 2005-09-27 15:53:00 [hometext] => um.............please, i'm begging you.......post comments.......good or bad.......... [bodytext] => i'm walking down the tunnel of time,
somewhere trapped inside my mind,
i looked to the left and saw a sign,
i looked to the right and fell behind,
but for some reason i can't see straight,
i'm losing it and i can't concentrate,

i'm stuck in this crazy house,
i wanna get out right now,
release me unlock the doors,
i'm not crazy anymore,

i'm stuck in this white padded room,
i'm in a straight jacket i cannot move,
slam my body against the wall,
hit face first and begin to fall,

i'm stuck in this crazy house,
i wanna get out right now,
release me unlock the doors,
i'm not crazy anymore

eyes closed, bloody nose, confused mind, can't find the real me, i am a black hearted dark dream, come find me. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => grim6669 [notes] => Edited for Spelling as Requested by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

crazy house

Contributed by grim6669 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:53:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i'm walking down the tunnel of time,
somewhere trapped inside my mind,
i looked to the left and saw a sign,
i looked to the right and fell behind,
but for some reason i can't see straight,
i'm losing it and i can't concentrate,

i'm stuck in this crazy house,
i wanna get out right now,
release me unlock the doors,
i'm not crazy anymore,

i'm stuck in this white padded room,
i'm in a straight jacket i cannot move,
slam my body against the wall,
hit face first and begin to fall,

i'm stuck in this crazy house,
i wanna get out right now,
release me unlock the doors,
i'm not crazy anymore

eyes closed, bloody nose, confused mind, can't find the real me, i am a black hearted dark dream, come find me.

Copyright © grim6669 ... [ 2005-09-27 15:53:00]
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Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:59:47 PM AEST
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That's one hell of a poem, loved it, probably would qualify as the best one I read today.

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:04:33 PM AEST
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well thank you remote....i'm blushing!!

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:10:35 PM AEST
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awsome write..havn't read one this good in a while..thanks for posting it.;)

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:52:34 PM AEST
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wow...this is really good, i liked it alot...i havent read a poem like this yet ...keep up the good writing

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by Lin54 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:48:11 PM AEST
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Your poem reminds me of cabin fever and I can feel the emotion of seeking in the words!

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:55:22 PM AEST
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Wow theres a write. Yes confusion is common for the depths of crazy. I know Ive visited Crazy more then a few times. Good write and yes I felt that crazy all the way through.

Whisper

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:55:46 PM AEST
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I've certainly felt like that before....nice...

Re: crazy house (User Rating: 1 )
by bit_me on Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:16:11 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one... Alot. lol

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