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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Deceived
[time] => 2003-01-18 14:40:00
[hometext] => * Hey, I don't know why I wrote this poem its a different feel than my usual poems. I just mystical poetry because thats what it conjures up in my mind. So yeah I hope you enjoy. I would really appreciate your comments on this. Thnx! *
[bodytext] => Hiding amongst the sun bleached rocks
Pale, lucid eyes stare hidden Out of hardened, angry faces Scrambling about, shrunken bellies Howling for food in this bleak wilderness A lone rider appears On a weary, forgotten horse He hails the odd inhabitants And asks for lodging and food They show no emotion their beady eyes tell all Their slimy fingers stroke the rocks lustily Beckoning the rider in He dines with them Whatever rotten morsel they can spare He falls into a deadened sleep They watch him almost like their cursed Their padded feet slap the floor Like their addicted, trancelike To watching him sleep He wakes with a cough Unable to move his limbs His panic bound eyes rove about He can see his breath He's their meal now They dine on him His supple raw body Torn apart by their fangs His blood will forever grace and torment their halls [comments] => 7 [counter] => 266 [topic] => 49 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )
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