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[aid] => mick
[title] => Snooze
[time] => 2005-09-26 07:56:34
[hometext] => wrote this one for creative writing class the morning it was due, can you see the where the inspiration came from??
[bodytext] => My mind is empty I’m submerged In the deep hallow of a dreamless mind A relief from the rush and hustle of consciousness Pure Until It is broken Taken and squeezed so that I can feel it stretching, straining to stay intact In despair it pops Worries flow over the edges In my mind all the doors are knocked And lights flipped on One bye one The circuits are connected Until They reach my eyes Shooting open as my body springs forward my surroundings soon focus The rhythm of knocking doors and flipping lights Distinguished I glance at the bedside table And hit snooze [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 73 [informant] => expired_promises [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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