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Array ( [sid] => 106471 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Willing Love [time] => 2005-09-25 19:11:57 [hometext] => I wrote this poem one night while laying in bed thinking about my boyfriend. I believe its the first good one i've wrote. My boyfriend and i have been going through some hard times w/ others not excepting us, so i decided to get my thoughts out on paper. [bodytext] => Laying in bed, alone at night
dreaming of you and me, with the stars so bright

Longing for a paradise, with no one around
you holding me close, near the ocean sounds

Waiting for the day when we don't have to hide
when they won't care if I'm by your side

when no one will notice what I am
and when I'm around I'll just blend in

I don't know how long it will be
for this dream to become a reality

I know it will happen, just you wait
there will be no rumors, with no hate

till then I'll always think of you
with a willing love forever ture [comments] => 5 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 2 [informant] => childsFaith46 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Willing Love

Contributed by childsFaith46 on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:11:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Laying in bed, alone at night
dreaming of you and me, with the stars so bright

Longing for a paradise, with no one around
you holding me close, near the ocean sounds

Waiting for the day when we don't have to hide
when they won't care if I'm by your side

when no one will notice what I am
and when I'm around I'll just blend in

I don't know how long it will be
for this dream to become a reality

I know it will happen, just you wait
there will be no rumors, with no hate

till then I'll always think of you
with a willing love forever ture




Copyright © childsFaith46 ... [ 2005-09-25 19:11:57]
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Re: My Willing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarletrayne on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:15:04 PM AEST
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Sweet, as long as you love eachother thats all that matters.


Re: My Willing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST
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beautiful write, time to make a candlelight dinner for the chap and or call him up, nice love letter here as a poem, to me anyway. Loved it. Tender dreaming.

Raquel Leah :D


Re: My Willing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:16:37 PM AEST
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Well hope it works, for you. When in "love" we all deseeve, happines. And yes what Raquel suggested as well.maybe keeping it, light, could be an answer. Nice write.


Brew~


Re: My Willing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:23:18 AM AEST
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this poem is perfect well done i hope things work out for you and your boyfriend
all my hope
jenni
xxxx


Re: My Willing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:33:13 AM AEST
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Ver y sweet, you should keep writing. Thanks so much for the comment. =hugs=




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