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Lying in helpless ****
Vomit in her hair
I know she cant quit

But I believed her
Found her soul and freed her
She still found the fix
And now I cant feel her

She wants to clean her wings
Fly through meadow springs
But she's ripped and dirty
She's Queen; amongst the druggie fly kings. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Alina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Queen Bee

Contributed by Alina on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Cant take her word for it
Lying in helpless ****
Vomit in her hair
I know she cant quit

But I believed her
Found her soul and freed her
She still found the fix
And now I cant feel her

She wants to clean her wings
Fly through meadow springs
But she's ripped and dirty
She's Queen; amongst the druggie fly kings.

Copyright Â© Alina ... [ 2005-09-24 12:33:32]
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Re: Queen Bee (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:46:37 PM AEST
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It's haunting and very graphic as well. I'm especially taken by the last stanza which is full of great imagery!

Keep up the fine writing!

dw

Re: Queen Bee (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:00:55 PM AEST
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Well all I can say is wow!

I'm actually not surpried by the poem as much as by a person who sees their condition if this is indeed you who you are writing about.

Re: Queen Bee (User Rating: 1 )
by ElevenToedSloth on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:19:10 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. It's very visual, and quite deep.

Re: Queen Bee (User Rating: 1 )
by ArsenicMyst on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:01:25 PM AEST
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so very well written ...

your poem defines the brutal struggle and reality within,
and in between caring friend and addict

*.¸.·´¨arsenic

Re: Queen Bee (User Rating: 1 )
by dobad on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:14:08 PM AEST
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I have known and loved her, but lost her to a power greater than I. Her passion claimed her. Good write

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