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Array ( [sid] => 106327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Love [time] => 2005-09-23 17:16:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If you told me I was beautiful
I'd believe it were a lie

If you told me that you loved me
I would question why

If you looked into my eyes
And said you could see through

I'd hide a little deeper
To make you more confused

If you gently clasped my hand in yours
And promised me a life so bliss

I'd believe you had a motive
Just to steal my kiss

If you whispered in my ear
Sweet-nothings in disguise

I'd pretend to see right through
And pass them off as lies

If you held me in your arms
And said your love was true

I'd wish my lips un-sewn
To say 'I love you too'

But if you kept your promise
And didn't hurt me so

Our love would still be strong
Not lost so long ago
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Lost Love

Contributed by xPixiexDustx on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 05:16:28 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

If you told me I was beautiful
I'd believe it were a lie

If you told me that you loved me
I would question why

If you looked into my eyes
And said you could see through

I'd hide a little deeper
To make you more confused

If you gently clasped my hand in yours
And promised me a life so bliss

I'd believe you had a motive
Just to steal my kiss

If you whispered in my ear
Sweet-nothings in disguise

I'd pretend to see right through
And pass them off as lies

If you held me in your arms
And said your love was true

I'd wish my lips un-sewn
To say 'I love you too'

But if you kept your promise
And didn't hurt me so

Our love would still be strong
Not lost so long ago

Copyright © xPixiexDustx ... [ 2005-09-23 17:16:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 05:44:35 PM AEST
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Hi Pixiedust! Welcome to YPDC!!
How sad and yet beautifully expressed. Wonderful
poem! This was a stunning expression of love lost
and then remembered. Great write!
Looking forward to more.

~Breezy

Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by xPixiexDustx on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 01:42:16 PM AEST
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Thanks. I've tried to post again.. but its not allowing me too. Hmm.

Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:31:11 PM AEST
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Reading this is so easy....you wrote this poem beautifully....
I think I have thought the same in some situations in my life so could relate...
keep writing I loved this one!
cheers!~
coni

Re: Lost Love (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 05:02:27 PM AEST
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Just beautifully written..Very good..
I'll give you a high..5...
God Bless

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